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Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 2nd, '10, 20:14

(Scott M)
you think you're clever when you write rhymes
you think it's clever to smoke weed. and who in their right mind
would think it's clever to make their album cover lime light?
i'm sublime, right. with my rhymes i'll supply like -
- your drug dealer when you're high. and in hind sight
i wish i never dissed your ass, 'cause now you're on mine, right?
i can tell when you're mad, i can tell when you're jealous
i can tell that you're upset that the world would just let us -
- rich kids have all the money when your broke ass works hard
and won't get enough revenue to afford a couple burnt sparks
from a lighter to light your weed, to drain your cells away
i can tell you're mad right now, you're hooked in my spell today.
and i can tell you're gay. all your pictures are black and white
or all in one colour, it's cause you're tryna hide the lipstick in 'em right?
when you call me a faggot, it just really makes me smile
mate, it really makes my day .. that just for this little while
you take out your personal stress on me ..... on the internet
you can't believe you're gay, that your brain has a male interest.
you refuse to accept. and it makes you feel better about yourself -
- to call other people gay, when really you just diss yourself.
sajjad you need some help. i can tell that you're repelled
from society .. i can tell you've got no skills under your belt.
so you go on the internet and act like you're someone else
but it's all a fairy tale, because we both know what is real
we both know what's the deal, we both know how you feel
you're a bully with a mic, the computer screen is your shield.

(Yah-hah)
You walkin in a drak alley hopeless, playin the blind peoples worst game,
Native jokes played I heard them when the white people first came,
Apparentlly his "punches" were dope,
Like the steriods he used must have stunted his growth,
Like reaLly Native jokes? Yeah yeah we all heard em before,
Xray think he escaped cause no ones hurt him before,
Man fuck that he I'll take Xray in for an Xray,
Sad cause his neck breaks into a different shape,
This different face not even his mother can look,
I'm Barry Sanders and this fucker is shook,
Shit I dont even fuckin know this xray,
Just another rapper who past his ex date,
Native jokes? Watch this Native provoked and I'll rip him,
Anon? we was cool I guess now you switchin?
So now xrays here and he's back to bitchin,
As if his dickriders didnt give him enough attention,
This isn't enough to rip him? Fuck him like who cares,
If your Robin the I'll have Christopher robin' this Pooh Bear,
You said Converse? Bitch all I wear is red chucks,
Stupid cats talkin bout 'Haha Red sucks',
With your lame ass your dead fucked,
Kicked em both in the pussy and one of my legs stuck,
'Like chicks can't be hard, girls are icky,
And when I think about em I get all hard and sticky",
Stupid bitches are giggling like a couple a sissies,
Sajjad talkin bout hes a bonefide xray,
I'll hit his lip and my bones collide to "X" ray,
Now is his death date and grim's got his tie on,
Sticks the syckle in his pisshole talkin bout 'Yeah thats right on',
Yeah I'm fuckin Native but I'm askin wat the fuck is he,
You couldnt find your roots if you was stuck in a tree,
So fuck it you'll bleed when I tomahawk ya,
EMERGENCY, WE NEED A NEW XRAY SOMEBODY CALL THE DOCTOR.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby BILI » Jan 2nd, '10, 20:22

This was dope,Scott had a nice verse :y: ,only thing I didnt like was that he was saying gay like in every 2nd line,except that,dope stuff man,
And Yah,your was fuckin dope,awesome stuff


If your Robin the I'll have Christopher robin' this Pooh Bear,
You said Converse? Bitch all I wear is red chucks,
Stupid cats talkin bout 'Haha Red sucks',
With your lame ass your dead fucked,
Kicked em both in the pussy and one of my legs stuck,
'Like chicks can't be hard, girls are icky,
:worship: :worship: dope

that leg stuck was funny as fuck :y:
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 2nd, '10, 20:31

Hahah thanks homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Xray » Jan 2nd, '10, 20:35

Once again Yah-Hah, no personals. How can you call that a diss if you have no personals? lol I don't even know you and I digged enough shit to KO you. Now you come back with this wack ass attempt? this shit was even worse than your first attempt. Rhyme's were half assed for real, barely did anything, shit was just boring ass rhymes. You said Xray more than I've said Xray and that's MY board name. Just shows the lack of wordplay, and creativity. Same goes for "Native jokes?" you said that shit 3 times, and then you act like it didn't hurt you. I know that shit burned you deep inside, you just don't wanna admit it.

And Scotty really? you call that good multis? All I read was you think your this you think your that, buncha wack ass rhymes. And then its like "I can tell, I can tell I can tell" get the fuck outta here with that half assed multis, thinking that shit is personal. That's no where near personal to even hurt me, both of yous suck dick at dissing. Matter fact Yah-Hah go learn to diss before you diss again. Not even gonna bother to respond again, this was boring as fuck. Scotty your not even worth a single bar, that's how wack your shit is.
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Spyder » Jan 2nd, '10, 22:22

this is some good beef like a special at BK. ima say shit was dope and stay out of it

good drop guys.
though im givin it to X and Anon so far :y:
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 2nd, '10, 22:28

Spyder wrote:this is some good beef like a special at BK. ima say shit was dope and stay out of it

good drop guys.
though im givin it to X and Anon so far :y:

Haha, nice one. :worship:
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:45

KO me? cause you said a bunch of Native jokes? diss was cool but you actin like you had to dig that shit up. Everyone on here know I'm Native, I'm proud of that shit. I don't hear you sayin shit bout your race. and you actin like I'm supposed to know you for personals or something. You must be trippin like Native jokes are really makin me cry behind my computer lmao really? They werent even as goos as the ones Anon said the first fuckin diss.
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby J Roc » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:11

Yah-hah wrote:(Scott M)
you think you're clever when you write rhymes
you think it's clever to smoke weed. and who in their right mind
would think it's clever to make their album cover lime light?
i'm sublime, right. with my rhymes i'll supply like -
- your drug dealer when you're high. and in hind sight
i wish i never dissed your ass, 'cause now you're on mine, right?
i can tell when you're mad, i can tell when you're jealous
i can tell that you're upset that the world would just let us -
- rich kids have all the money when your broke ass works hard
and won't get enough revenue to afford a couple burnt sparks
from a lighter to light your weed, to drain your cells away
i can tell you're mad right now, you're hooked in my spell today.
and i can tell you're gay. all your pictures are black and white
or all in one colour, it's cause you're tryna hide the lipstick in 'em right?
when you call me a faggot, it just really makes me smile
mate, it really makes my day .. that just for this little while
you take out your personal stress on me ..... on the internet
you can't believe you're gay, that your brain has a male interest.
you refuse to accept. and it makes you feel better about yourself -
- to call other people gay, when really you just diss yourself.
sajjad you need some help. i can tell that you're repelled
from society .. i can tell you've got no skills under your belt.
so you go on the internet and act like you're someone else
but it's all a fairy tale, because we both know what is real
we both know what's the deal, we both know how you feel
you're a bully with a mic, the computer screen is your shield.

(Yah-hah)
You walkin in a drak alley hopeless, playin the blind peoples worst game,
Native jokes played I heard them when the white people first came,
Apparentlly his "punches" were dope,
Like the steriods he used must have stunted his growth,
Like reaLly Native jokes? Yeah yeah we all heard em before,
Xray think he escaped cause no ones hurt him before,
Man fuck that he I'll take Xray in for an Xray,
Sad cause his neck breaks into a different shape,
This different face not even his mother can look,
I'm Barry Sanders and this fucker is shook,
Shit I dont even fuckin know this xray,
Just another rapper who past his ex date,
Native jokes? Watch this Native provoked and I'll rip him,
Anon? we was cool I guess now you switchin?
So now xrays here and he's back to bitchin,
As if his dickriders didnt give him enough attention,
This isn't enough to rip him? Fuck him like who cares,
If your Robin the I'll have Christopher robin' this Pooh Bear,
You said Converse? Bitch all I wear is red chucks,
Stupid cats talkin bout 'Haha Red sucks',
With your lame ass your dead fucked,
Kicked em both in the pussy and one of my legs stuck,
'Like chicks can't be hard, girls are icky,
And when I think about em I get all hard and sticky",
Stupid bitches are giggling like a couple a sissies,
Sajjad talkin bout hes a bonefide xray,
I'll hit his lip and my bones collide to "X" ray,
Now is his death date and grim's got his tie on,
Sticks the syckle in his pisshole talkin bout 'Yeah thats right on',
Yeah I'm fuckin Native but I'm askin wat the fuck is he,
You couldnt find your roots if you was stuck in a tree,
So fuck it you'll bleed when I tomahawk ya,
EMERGENCY, WE NEED A NEW XRAY SOMEBODY CALL THE DOCTOR.



This is getttting crazy ... Bringing Banned Member's In Here to Disss Each other hahahaha

i guess me & fa Q Sparked a War Zone .... The Cw section is fillled with Disses :o

Yah Hah ... Realllly Nice As usual.

You walkin in a drak alley hopeless, playin the blind peoples worst game,
Native jokes played I heard them when the white people first came,

My Favorite Part ^

Scottty Came Nicer than i remember him being.

i wish i never dissed your ass, 'cause now you're on mine, right?

That part's stilll gay tho ^





Nice disss :y:
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:16

Thanks homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Xray » Jan 3rd, '10, 06:29

Yah-hah wrote:KO me? cause you said a bunch of Native jokes? diss was cool but you actin like you had to dig that shit up. Everyone on here know I'm Native, I'm proud of that shit. I don't hear you sayin shit bout your race. and you actin like I'm supposed to know you for personals or something. You must be trippin like Native jokes are really makin me cry behind my computer lmao really? They werent even as goos as the ones Anon said the first fuckin diss.

Quit bitching, our diss hasn't even been recorded yet, cause once its done its officially over. I'm not even a textcee yet our shit still destroyed both of your disses. You're bitching about my Native jokes, yet your acting like it didn't bug you at all. Whatever though I don't care, you obviously lost and we haven't even RECORDED yet.
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 06:32

Hahaha damn fool settle down. You acting like this is my life on the line. It's the fucking internet, yet you all trippin cause your all big and bad. Damn yeah man I'm too scared. PLease don't get your mic out thats way too much. Yeah man you got me, no you destroyed me. You had so many personals it's like you know me man. Good job dude your the best :y:
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Xray » Jan 3rd, '10, 06:36

Lol mic out, that's what I thought.
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 06:39

Sarcasm. I don't even do disses but you started trippin jumpin down my homegirls throat. I'm just protectin my own wat you expect? Know you would do the same thing for a homie. You just be actin like you know everything sometimes like you on top of the world or somethin. I'm cool with you but damn you gotta relax sometimes.
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 3rd, '10, 09:05

oh oh

BNR gettn em
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Re: Doctor Notice (Xray diss 2) ft Scott M

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 3rd, '10, 11:06

? Yo xray you mad trippin dude. textcee? I never even knew that was a word. On some extra commputer nerd shit. Hell I don't even know you. All I know is the 2nd song I did you go and bash me? Pretty lame man. Good shit though Yah and whoever scott is. Pooh bear line lmao
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