Favorite Piece: Emadyville-Untitled

[Yah-hah]

"From passive aggressive to actin obsessive,
Back to the present where your mad and defensive,
So sad you’re expended but glad your inventive,
Relentless to grab the pen and add a sentence,
They’re called bars and makes sense but it’s hard,
To see your life in a sentence stuck behind bars,
You used to handle shit but you can’t bleed at this pace,
Your my minds out this world it musta needed the space,
It’s like Gods in your hands as your raising the steak knife,
It decides if you live now that’s a raisin the stakes knife,
I can see your life flash and I’d be praisin a great life,
Maybe God was callin but wasn’t sayin the date right,
You’re lucky you’re alive after the shit you’d take,
Wasn’t it like 13 damn, I didn’t think you’d awake,
I thought you’d handle shit, I guess for your sake,
You realized dreams didn’t mean shit when you’re awake…"

[BILI]

Damn nice piece Emady,dope stuff

[DƎRDYPK]

Damn Emadyville this is very dope bro

They’re called bars and makes sense but it’s hard,
To see your life in a sentence stuck behind bars,
You used to handle shit but you can’t bleed at this pace,
Your my minds out this world it musta needed the space,

my favorite part of the whole piece
keep up the work homie

[Spyder]

so why is YH posting this

but damn Emady i didnt know you could write like that
very dope and emotional homie

[Emadyville]

so why is YH posting this

but damn Emady i didnt know you could write like that
very dope and emotional homie

i do rap man, I stopped putting creative writing shit on here like a year ago.


Thanks everyone for the feedback

[Spyder]

so why is YH posting this

but damn Emady i didnt know you could write like that
very dope and emotional homie

i do rap man, I stopped putting creative writing shit on here like a year ago.


Thanks everyone for the feedback

well thats y i aint seen nuttin, cause u havent ina year. ive been here under that lol

should post more


so YH are we pm you OUR OWN favorite pieces?

[Emadyville]

so YH are we pm you OUR OWN favorite pieces?

yeah, a verse you like the most

[Spyder]

so YH are we pm you OUR OWN favorite pieces?

yeah, a verse you like the most

yes but what IVE written or my favorite from SOMEONE ELSE

[Emadyville]

so YH are we pm you OUR OWN favorite pieces?

yeah, a verse you like the most

yes but what IVE written or my favorite from SOMEONE ELSE

what you've written lol why would it be someone else's, this is the creative writing section son

[Spyder]

well idk, there was a topic somewhere else to find someone elses best peice

[Emadyville]

well idk, there was a topic somewhere else to find someone elses best peice

just om it to yah-yah, and you'll be good, any other questions ask him, this was all his idea

[Yah-hah]

Yeah ypur favprite verse that YOU've done. just pm it too me Spyder

[mcZu]

Nice on Dubs, definitly on of your best.