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Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:34

[Intro]
Snow falls from the sky on this cold long night
your about to travel threw my mind hold on tight.....

[Verse #1]
I dropped outta school when I realized I aint shit
Sometimes I never had weed So I was sniffing paint bitch!
I wrote a few tunes & I had a few beers
I finished that up quick so what to do here?
keep stepping my game up I'm never gonna change what
I say or do untill I'm blowing out my brains slut
I also can't stand when rappers talking glits & glammer
best believe I can't wait till Weezy hit's the slammer
my dream is to fuck every actress on degrassi
surrounded by 12 year old girls looking trashy
I know it seems wrong but really should I give a fuck?
I was taught to smack bitches, smoke weed & live it up
So if im not kicking rhymes or smoking a spliff
best believe I'm out somewhere choking a bitch
all my life I been loco it's really nothing new
you didn't know that? better get a fucking clue

[Chorus]{singing}
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low
Lookin to the sky
Laying in the snow
Even when I die
best believe i'll know
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low

[Verse #2]
If I had a million bucks I'd get any girl I wanna
I'd get my dick sucked while i'm puffing marijuana
sneakers & speakers with a stereo to pump it up
even if I'll never live like that so fucking what?
as long as I got my friends & family behind me
I'm pretty sure now that the devil won't find me
so pass me a glass cause the holiday is lonely
All I want for Christmas is one girl to show me
sides of me I never seen. a piece of me I never found
I wanna be with you & have you say "its better now"
every night I lay awake thinkin what to do?
not a second goes by that I don't think of you
I gotta move on though. even if it's hard
this road with no lights. only gets so dark
All my mind is focused on is where I'm gonna go
I really don't know but Imma tell you this though

[Chorus]{singing}
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low
Lookin to the sky
Laying in the snow
Even when I die
best believe i'll know
Even when I'm high
Best believe I'm low
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:39

much love for posting this bro :worship:
I owe you ;)
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:40

It's all good homie. Just tryin to revive CW ya know. Good shit bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:41

um, flow much :unsure:

FLOW was off the chain, don't usually notice a flow that good just from reading it, rhymes were dope, everything fit the "even when i'm high" shit, great job homie :y: :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:42

Emadyville wrote:um, flow much :unsure:

FLOW was off the chain, don't usually notice a flow that good just from reading it, rhymes were dope, everything fit the "even when i'm high" shit, great job homie :y: :y:


thanks :worship:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:45

you got a beat to that? you get the right beat and flow that shit nice that could be a real hot joint no lie :y:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:46

please record it
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:48

I wrote it without a beat
still need to find one :flower:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:49

nigga do it fast

im in need of moar pk and this is a piece that deserves to be recorded :worship:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:49

I'll see what I can do ;)
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:53

i got a lot of beats, not sure what ur going for on this, but if you got ideas let me know ill try and help you out. or try shadowville.com, mad beats on there for free :y:

and if u want a beat already used (mainstream or whatever) let me know i can most likely get it :y:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:03

This is defnitly song material PK, dope ass flow. Record this bitch like a sextape nukka!
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 19:24

mcZu wrote:This is defnitly song material PK, dope ass flow. Record this bitch like a sextape nukka!


hahaha thanks Zu :worship:
I think I may of found the right beat
be expecting the audio version of this very soon :8)
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: DerdyPK- "Even when I'm high"

Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 19:25

Sweet man, cant wait :y:
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