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Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:37

Emcee Zu - Opt or Not to Opt

Procedures proceed to ensure that that dude
Knows how to acknowledge knowledge, due
Being knowledgeable in latitude terms too
On the longitude I use my attitude in terms to
Add it up ‘till it becomes rude
So Zu being arrogant is just a mirror shard sharpened due
The coordinates cooperating when I mirror lost too
Navigation checked; figures march through
Navigate through like chess do, sneakers feel like frost too
Agitate, convulse, shake, con pulse and then sue
The issues issuing certain restraint issues
Shit’s cruel, and due humanity being that rude
So being a human being just adds to being that dude
Far from being cool, shipped away too
I’m on deck though I can’t ship through
Can’t dock my ship –lost my grip too
I’m infamous, ‘cause I cause people to shock too
This logic is paralyzed though dressed in a parabolic suit

Optics suggest to condensate mo’ often
I tell ‘em my emotions are cons, gotta sedate them mo’ often
People segregate too often
They rather set a degrade rate than greet each other
It’s greed that’s bothering sisters and brothers
We’re all humans, yet I insist to differ from the others
Life’s rigor mortis –pen game make’s it softer
So from now on I’m gonna grab the pen mo’ often
Insert the pin and then throw away the grenade to bother
The people who misuse the ink to alter
The way people think –all they do is arouse a laughter
I sink away when I flow like an epigram author
While I’m at it I try to alter my alter ego before her ego decides to slaughter
She resides in my cerebral cortex though doctored
An animal, a beast that I fathered
She's revolving 'round free yet she seems to be a martyr
Every single common issue has caused her
To single out the illusions on a field with proper copper
So, should I opt to...
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Spyder » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:05

jeesus Zu is a complex fuck when he wants ta be :worship:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:09

Yeah man got that Lupe blood lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:47

We’re all humans, yet I insist to differ from the others
Life’s rigor mortis –pen game make’s it softer
So from now on I’m gonna grab the pen mo’ often
Insert the pin and then throw away the grenade to bother
The people who misuse the ink to alter
The way people think –all they do is arouse a laughter


this whole thing was fire, hands down amazing shit, that was my favorite part tho^ and the bold line i loved :worship:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby dR3 » Jan 3rd, '10, 06:03

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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:02

Thanks people, 'preciate it. And Yah is right, I've got that Lupe blood in me, lol. :smoking:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:07

Wolf blood plus Lupe Blood. dopest motherfuckin werewolf lmao
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:09

Word, if I'm ever caught under the full moon with a pen and pad, damn.. Dunno if said person will live to tell.
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:14

mcZu wrote:Word, if I'm ever caught under the full moon with a pen and pad, damn.. Dunno if said person will live to tell.

How you think Patrick Swayze died? :shifty:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:19

Yah-hah wrote:
mcZu wrote:Word, if I'm ever caught under the full moon with a pen and pad, damn.. Dunno if said person will live to tell.

How you think Patrick Swayze died? :shifty:

I don't know, I'm not supposed to tell a thing. :zipped:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 3rd, '10, 12:57

Oh shit me too :( I;m fucked
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 13:53

No problem, nothing is known yet. :sweating:
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Re: Thank you for your sharing spirit! ! Support!

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:24

cheap ed hardy wrote:I very much agree with the statement upstairs. This problem for a long time I think did not understand that, thanks to you for reminding me came to understand.

Okay.
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby Spyder » Jan 6th, '10, 02:31

cheap ed hardy wrote:I very much agree with the statement upstairs. This problem for a long time I think did not understand that, thanks to you for reminding me came to understand.


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idk what to say to that :unsure:
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Re: Favorite Piece thread: mcZu-"Opt or not to Opt"

Postby mcZu » Jan 10th, '10, 00:27

Word to the bump.
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