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F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

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F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 3rd, '10, 13:11

Givin Beef Back - Smithy

Givin beef to one of the "Forums Finest"
making music when your not that good of an artist
writin fastest like your rhymes are just the darkest
my lines spray sparks, makes yours just forgotten
makin every word you say looked fucked up and rotten
F&F are hitting & Grill-ing-you, we are Will-ing-to
be the ones Kill-ing-you, after Thrill-ing-you
Callin out "Who Wants It"? Then askin "Who Shot Ya"
but as Solace is rankless no longer "5Star Generals"
his rhmyes are wronger, like he overdosed on "minerals"
his voice is so high pitched, its like he has no "genitals"
he watched so many movies, he's one of the fake "criminals"
just like zu comin in like wet stew, ya tryin to brake threw,
im gonna finish this beef with my finger screaminng Fuck You,
shit im just gonna throw u in a cage, like you live at the zoo
not forgot about spyder as you kreep and crawl my style gets hotter
your like a fein on crack, your addicted like a blogger

I dont know when Slim, Chet, Bullet, Edge, Relapse
are going to do theres..
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 13:52

Not bad in terms of writing, but kinda lame in terms of a diss. Nice try though. :b:
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby SajN » Jan 3rd, '10, 14:01

Why are there so many disses since yesterday?

Can someone fill me in?




And also, I don't know how much hating it is but please don't let it go out in other sections.
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 14:03

The 5Star Generals vs F&F..
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 3rd, '10, 14:05

mcZu wrote:The 5Star Generals vs F&F..



Yeah Lol :tounge2:
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby AliJack » Jan 3rd, '10, 15:36

its aight, alot of slant rhymes,

and
Kill-ing-you, after Thrill-ing-you
I dont really consider that a multi lol.. only syllables that aren't actually the same word are kill and thrill.
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:19

SajN wrote:Why are there so many disses since yesterday?

Can someone fill me in?




And also, I don't know how much hating it is but please don't let it go out in other sections.


It's just a friendly beef because they decieded to make a rap group and the 5 Star Generals had to put them in there place. It won't leave the three rap forums. (Yes maybe audio :o )
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:23

lol at smithy dissing 5 stars generals SMH hahahahaha :n:
that was weak in terms of diss lol
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:27

^ shut ya ass up lil n1gglet
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:30

le tunisien wrote:lol at smithy dissing 5 stars generals SMH hahahahaha :n:
that was weak in terms of diss lol


well atleast i beat u ina battle :whistle:
and atleast i aint scared to try like you lil pussy :smoking:
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:31

slimsoxshady wrote:^ shut ya ass up lil n1gglet

:unsure: stfu :'(
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:31

le tunisien wrote:
slimsoxshady wrote:^ shut ya ass up lil n1gglet

:unsure: stfu :'(


lol
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:41

Smithy wrote:
le tunisien wrote:lol at smithy dissing 5 stars generals SMH hahahahaha :n:
that was weak in terms of diss lol


well atleast i beat u ina battle :whistle:
and atleast i aint scared to try like you lil pussy :smoking:

me a lil pussy? ok ok :angry:
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:47

:snack:

*waiting for all ya to kill each other,and then I`ll take the forum bwuhaha :devil:
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Re: F&F - Givin Beef Back(5StarGeneral Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 3rd, '10, 17:48

le tunisien wrote:
Smithy wrote:
le tunisien wrote:lol at smithy dissing 5 stars generals SMH hahahahaha :n:
that was weak in terms of diss lol


well atleast i beat u ina battle :whistle:
and atleast i aint scared to try like you lil pussy :smoking:

me a lil pussy? ok ok :angry:


Anyway back on topic,

Le dont you have some cheating to do ? :whistle:
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