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3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:22

Look this group is dumb as Moe, Curly and Larry
As soon as the stooges’ s warning starts to carry
it occurs theyr obsessed like Mariah
Im raps messiah, rising up, aint no1 higher
Nah, man, We are the army, we make up the troop
Yea wer forums finest, up and coming hip-hop group
From writin in my notepad, just sittin on my stoop
To thinking about which general il take out back and shoot
I don’t care if theyr skill level exceeds mine
Cause these lines, are lethal, they bleed crimes
I was gunna go 8 bars, but that wasn’t enough
This prepubescent Omar just had to get tough
Im bout to get rough, yea, im bout to get violent
edge, bullet and smithy, are going to remain silent?
Give some solace to Omars mom, don’t wanna c her cry
But Omar just had to get loud, now Omar just has to die
And im a mother fucker, Imma fuck Omar’s mother
I saw this faggets pic, lookin like Kumar’s brother
I eat u up like white castle, ur a fag who likes asshole
Ur peasants, im vassal, kids shouldn’t be in my hassle
U might get black and blued, get smacked and bruise
Yea im rappin new, but still gladly attackin u
And this spyder couldn’t scare ms. Muffet
Your just better off singin with Jim Buffet
This arachnids gunna see blood like Su-Wu
Imma end my verse here, cuz to me its Zu who?
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby Edge » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:26

and on that note im done, bc relapse.lp isnt gunna respond bc u guys r cool, same with chet... and slimsoxshady already dropped a diss so hes probably done... and bullet and smithy r backing down... so im left by myself... guess F&F is over... good work guys... anyhow lemme get some feed on this last diss
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:27

The Edge wrote:and on that note im done, bc relapse.lp isnt gunna respond bc u guys r cool, same with chet... and slimsoxshady already dropped a diss so hes probably done... and bullet and smithy r backing down... so im left by myself... guess F&F is over... good work guys... anyhow lemme get some feed on this last diss

im not backing out im in it...but im not IN the group ill still be in the diss, dont worry ;)
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:29

i see some good lines yeah :flower: :y:
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby BILI » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:32

Coleon wrote:group is done guys, more crews coming so hopefully you guys find a home haha

this :y:
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby Edge » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:33

le tunisien wrote:i see some good lines yeah :flower: :y:


thanks for the feed

and colen and billi found this wack?
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:34

The Edge wrote:
le tunisien wrote:i see some good lines yeah :flower: :y:


thanks for the feed

and colen and billi found this wack?

i thought it was great :confusion:
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Re: 3 stooges

Postby Edge » Jan 3rd, '10, 20:37

bullet_boy46 wrote:
The Edge wrote:
le tunisien wrote:i see some good lines yeah :flower: :y:


thanks for the feed

and colen and billi found this wack?

i thought it was great :confusion:


thanks man lol
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 3rd, '10, 23:06

:worship: bump :whistle:
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 3rd, '10, 23:08

bullet_boy46 wrote::worship: bump :whistle:


haha word, no1s responding to this one
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 23:21

The Edge wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote::worship: bump :whistle:


haha word, no1s responding to this one

i thought ff already lost :unsure:
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 00:07

coleon u really think im that bad? i think ur being a little harsh... i know im not on their level nor urs but i feel that this one wasnt bad

and yea we lost, but i had this diss made and wasnt gunna not post it

anyone wanna break it down and show me the strong/weak points?
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jan 4th, '10, 00:12

Coleon wrote:
The Edge wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote::worship: bump :whistle:


haha word, no1s responding to this one


I'm afraid... this lyrical insanity has made me shit, piss, and puke simultaneously in fear


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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 00:24

if every1 keeps knocking our drops without giving actualy criticism, how r we supposed to get better? if u dont like my drops, thats fine, i respect ur opinion... but rather than say something like "that drop sucked, u r horrible" let me get actual feedback on how i can improve, cause that i would appreciate
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Re: 3 stooges (5 star general diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 00:27

Was actually really suprised how dope it was. A few really good line. Zu who lmao. Good one though man you getter alot better
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