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Re: Punchlines you could never get to work

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 3rd, '10, 21:55

Coleon wrote:ever have a great concept or some word play you could never make perfect?

live I was think

"Holy shit, I'm pope-stool like Fed Ex"

which is a double whammy but unless it was audio it'd most likely go unnoticed and I have tons more I can never get to work :(

I don't get that punchline, sorry. :sweating:

Looks dope, but my mind isn't deciphering it now.
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Re: Punchlines you could never get to work

Postby mcZu » Jan 3rd, '10, 21:57

Even if you married your own father you wouldn't made-a-name..

Unles it's audio, people won't get that made-a-name is the same as maiden name.

And I've got tons of where that came from.
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Re: Punchlines you could never get to work

Postby classthe_king » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:04

i get your trying to say postal but what the fuck is a pope stool :laughing:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Punchlines you could never get to work

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:30

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:i get your trying to say postal but what the fuck is a pope stool :laughing:


holy shit = pope stool (stool equals shit, pope is holy)

postal like fed ex

haha that's why it never works

Oh, I get it now, haha.

The pope-stool is a bit of a reach though.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Punchlines you could never get to work

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:36

Coleon wrote:that's when I revert back to the title

Nukka
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