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Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 04:24

This is a rude awakening for all those motherfucking posers,
Who beef through the web fronting like they gangsters,
Y'all are cocky wanksters, just come to my hood,
Like you should, so I can ask who shot ya that good,
Solace acting a fool, running his mouth like if he was black,
He look like a terrorist from Iraq, might have a bomb on his back,
le tunisien is a clear faggot, you've seen this prick's pic?, wack,
Spyder's my homey I'm a keep him intact, But still it's grim fact,
You mess with the lower class, when you claim your the B.I.G,
Bulletboy is not your level, to him your a hardcore devil, you see,
Smithy is getting pushed around, weren't you gonna stand your ground?,
Seems like Sox and Edge fight back, go!,bite, attack, beat them down,
Would be better if this was real beef, so I wouldn't think your a pair of clowns,
Like mcZu, why is a holland boy rapping?, shouldn't you be selling flowers for free,
5 Star Posers and Forums Faggots, acting all tough when they really hug trees,
Watch Glee, and live in Holland(mcZu), Y'all should be gettin a backhand,
This is a stupid-ass internet beef, forget this grief, I'm going back to my land,
Keep beefing and decide who the biggest cocky wankster group is as planned,

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 4th, '10, 04:29

this is getting outta hand....all these disses...did i start it all with the Rc diss :unsure:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 4th, '10, 04:30

You mess with the lower class, when you claim your the B.I.G,
Bulletboy is not your level, to him your a hardcore devil, you see


was that a diss, cause i thought that diss he did was really good... i took it as a compliment, you really went on mcZu. and i thought this was a great diss
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 04:45

There were a few lines that didnt really rhyme. The first two didnt rhyme at all. Idk didnt really like amaze me. It was ok, compared to some of the disses running around here.
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 04:48

It does seem not good enough for a truce. This can't squash anything I think. But I do like some of the lines man. Well... the first four lines actually. LOL.
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 04:51

gutawafang wrote:It does seem not good enough for a truce. This can't squash anything I think. But I do like some of the lines man. Well... the first four lines actually. LOL.

i wanted this to be like a way of dissing all of em and at the same time wake em up. like why you beefing for no reason? apparently its way more of a diss than a squasher but i still like it. :y:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:00

So why you dissing if you want to end dissing? :n:

Overall, it was lacking and honestly, whack. Rhymes were simple, punches were limited, you swear excessively; it seems you are the one trying to be gangster, not us.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 05:03

Relapse.LP wrote:So why you dissing if you want to end dissing? :n:

Overall, it was lacking and honestly, whack. Rhymes were simple, punches were limited, you swear excessively; it seems you are the one trying to be gangster, not us.

swear excessively? wtf are you smoking? i said faggot twice and mothafucking once!!!!1
well whatever....
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:05

2sDay wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:So why you dissing if you want to end dissing? :n:

Overall, it was lacking and honestly, whack. Rhymes were simple, punches were limited, you swear excessively; it seems you are the one trying to be gangster, not us.

swear excessively? wtf are you smoking? i said faggot twice and mothafucking once!!!!1
well whatever....

You just said it again. And again. So add two more times. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
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Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 05:06

^ LMAO
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 05:06

Relapse.LP wrote:
2sDay wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:So why you dissing if you want to end dissing? :n:

Overall, it was lacking and honestly, whack. Rhymes were simple, punches were limited, you swear excessively; it seems you are the one trying to be gangster, not us.

swear excessively? wtf are you smoking? i said faggot twice and mothafucking once!!!!1
well whatever....

You just said it again. And again. So add two more times. :y:

biased decision im gonna pretend u didnt say shit.....
retard.. :whistle:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:06

You're a fucking horrible writer with a fucking horrible self-esteem. :shifty: :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 05:07

Relapse.LP wrote:You're a fucking horrible writer with a fucking horrible self-esteem. :shifty: :shifty:

you swear excessively...... :tounge2:
pussy..
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 05:09

LOL.
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:09

2sDay wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:You're a fucking horrible writer with a fucking horrible self-esteem. :shifty: :shifty:

you swear excessively...... :tounge2:
pussy..

N.igga, it's on. Drop a verse dissing me and I'll drop a verse dissing you. :y:
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