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Favorite Piece thread:gutawafang-"Despair"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 05:12

beyond repair, i'm feeding on despair
i'm tearing my hair, scaring myself
i need consolation, words of salvation
in dictations, poetic decorations
won't you feel this, i'ma kill this
if you wanna steal this, i will diss
tissues neither, i wanna rant and rave
prepare me a coffin, then renovate my grave
i'm breathing my last coughing, "it is all fate" engraved
goddamn, i don't wanna wait in caves

my eyes squint, then they came to a close
my mind sprints, it seems a shame adios
wait, i think i need God to help me up
i pray cuz i think i got to, He kept me up
i see the light, breathed it clean, i hover
i feel so light, like in a dream, whatever.

despair,misery i feel, do you care
when i go down, do you stand back and stare
fuck it, i don't wanna feel like this
but i'm still like this, i'ma be like this
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread:gutawafang-"Despair"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 07:31

I really dig this one fish
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Piece thread:gutawafang-"Despair"

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 08:03

Ya'll should listen to the audio of it. ;)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Ay1dk4OgFQ

Thanks guys. :happy:
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