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Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 05:15

Sentus- Make A Name

Your hope I devastate,
And nope I’ll neva taste the pain you’ve tasted
Or the blood, sweat and tears that you’ve wasted
Throw me the best you’ve got homie ive faced it
The broken rhymes in my unspoken mind pasted
Together to form this clever storm, ive made it rain
And if you lost it all then you’ve played the game
Standin over eighty slain rappers
Bendin over backwards just tryin to get you to say my name
Metaphorically, you focused to back then
Cause historically I ain’t supposed to happen
They’ve distorted me so you won’t to be exposed to rappin
And it worries me cause ive posted as crap when
Really I’ve had it good, truly I ain’t worth the skill
But it has all set me up for the perfect kill
I know that I probably deserved it still
But why when in the end I only preferred the bills

(Chorus)
Yo how in the world could he spit like this
He has got to be one of those rich white kids
Diamond in the rough, but his departure is soon
I was ready for this as soon as i marched out the womb
And im hopin for the day our music floods the block
I'll take it regardless of whether it was luck or not
No one can stop me from running out to take the pain
I've attained and just go out and make a name

Sick wit determination he’s been pierced wit the fire
He’s out for extermination but he’s fierce wit desire
It’s all up for interpretation but the fears we acquire
Will soon burn your face in wit the tears we inspire
He appears as a liar but he gives it all for the game
Fall in the flames; soon they will be callin ya name
Im ballin like James and fight for the respect I deserve
Expect to be served wit your own shit like I reflected ya words
Im erect with the urge to do battle it overwhelms me
Going against all odds it im fighting on helms deep
But I’ll be victorious cause im striking with glory’s fist
To take a name and make the pain that's made me notorious
This story is the same chapter played backwards over again
Spit a verse, but just receive the same cold shoulder again
Smolder the pen, cause you can't understand or comprehend
Having the upper hand has got me in this wonderland n' poppy trend

Chorus

For most the hunger inside explodes like thunder then dies
But I'll break ya spine and take what's mine as I plunder my prize
I went under disguise as the white boy who just loved to do it
Took my ball and chain, made a wall of pain and shoved you through it
Nothin to it, striking back with that nineties state of mind
Fuck your fan base when I spit I send nine g’s straight to mine
Finding crazy rhymes to make what I say a ballad
Take what you’re supposed to do n' exposin you so your name’s invalid
Your whole game is pallid, no hope, you’ve been left in the dark
You’re wit the big dogs so you sound bit fraud when you pretend to bark
I’ll lend a spark cause i got enough fire to give you the flame to make it
But once that’s warm ill take the platform that keeps you up and break it
I hate it when wimpy pussies tempt n’ push me, then you stomp n’ hate
I'll always pull through my game is full proof I'll never compensate
Watch n wait, you should never get in bed wit me sire
I'll never stop comin at you, satisfaction is the death of desire
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby classthe_king » Jan 4th, '10, 12:30

props Yah
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 12:34

No problem man, dopest shit you got IMO. Mad props homie :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby classthe_king » Jan 4th, '10, 20:55

Thanks :worship:
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Re: Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 01:21

Thanks :worship:

Coleon, you talkin bout Sentus?
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Re: Favorite Peice Thread-class the king-"Make a Name"

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 01:38

haha either today or tommorow. I got a piece i want to post with it but im waiting for the right time.
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