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Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

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Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 06:35

I try protect my crew from Solace...and y'all go start some shit
Guys, I'm much sicker than some barf and shit
Your parents goin need a fuckin cart and shit when i take apart ya shit
And dump it at the park and shit
Just know that tryina "spark" some shit just leaves you in the dark and shit
Whoever's wishing harm will leave with missing arms when this diss is done
Leave you with no wisdom son, the rest of you on chicken farms
Before dissing, think how you gonna hang with me like drapes dawg?
When you're so far below my level that you only see my shade walk
Leave you detached like grape jobs, your punchlines turn to my lunch time
Lets eat...got the Spyder on top and so I just crunch...grind
Only way he write rhymes that "touch" mine is if i dip my pen in his venom
Now onto the Zu, skin that beast and turn him to denim
You goin think the fuckin sky is falling when i rip out your spinal column -
- for thinking that your rhymes are ballin.
No more Spyders crawling
I got my go-go-gadget flow Lupe'd around every animal cage
Yea you might be a big ass Zu but it's "hunt the animals" day
I get so "physical" with mine like my rhymes are doctored
I see Zu goin hard, then peep his avatar...awkward
Dude looks like he writes rhymes in a library with a Guide-to-Free
So I steal this guy's degree...don't quit your day job at the pharmacy
My Spydie senses telling me...insects don't have special powers
No rain unless theres clouds, so will drown you with the showers
At least Zu has the wit, you get Socced-hur (here), i pack the kick
You get smoked like packaged sticks, in battle he's the "captured" prick (General? nooo!)
My Spidey senses also tell me that your response will be...so very lame
You're just not "dope" enough my dude, I married "Mary-Jane" (spiderman, hola)
Your army Generals ain't helping you when I drop rockets
And you wonder how the entire Zu can end up in my Hot Pocket
Y'all got the trash day flow, plus y'all recycle
My "arm"-Strong (Lance) the way I "beat up" these bikers
Zu said y'all the Wright Borthers so I go and break your apparatus
Then break that so called "chemistry" of yours like a failed crystal lattice

Say what? got Tunisien on my sonar
Saw me write some stuff and surely, he got a boner
I thought Tunisien was just a TR Stan, what the fuck's he doing?
Writes so many "bars" for me, but as you'd think, not one is "moving"
When Tunisien wrote his verse I know what he was thinking...
"Damn, this "beef" is getting huge, I gotta throw my dick in"
Tuna man, pipe down, why you tryina battle me?
You couldn't cum "straight" even if you jerked off without gravity
I know your faggot ways and why you came to go "drop bars" (soap)
Is anyone surprised by his intention to get Sox "hard"? (gross dude)
Call my flow 2012, this how your fuckin world ends
It's time to just come out the closet and stop photoshopping in fake girlfriends
I throw some TNT into his ocean, watch the Tuna explode
Then point a nuke toward his country and send the Boom! to his folk
Last edited by slimsoxshady on Mar 19th, '10, 05:58, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien Special)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 06:43

You had alot of punches, some were good some where meh. I mean going up against these top tier guys you gotta bring heat. It's wasnt terrible. I saw a few parts that didnt rhyme well and some punches were pretty weak. But you had a couple good punches. The last 2 lines of 1st verse was actually kinda dope lol thr wright brother line. Gettin better homie just keep at it ya know
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 06:52

^ so according to you, i didn't "bring the heat"?
lol gtfoh
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 06:55

Naw man aint saying that you brought it homie, just sayin bring more lol. My bad came out kinda different when I typed it. Sayin your brought heat but dont stop comin ya know. Keep at it bro :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 06:57

gotta love the nameplay and wordplay. Awesome Sox. Round of applause. :worship:
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 07:37

:y:

we aint done
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 17:45

The Edge wrote::y:

we aint done

we ARE done lol
I just thought I'd get rid of some rhymes thats all, clean out the rhyme book ;)
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 4th, '10, 18:34

^ lol yea i'm kinda into it a lil...but i'm just tryina get on a roll so i can drop a couple good audio pieces before i gotta go back to college for the spring semester at the end of January

i'm kinda interested to know which punches are really reaching in your opinion...let me know
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby mcZu » Jan 4th, '10, 19:35

slimsoxshady wrote:Dude looks like he writes rhymes in a library with a Guide-to-Free
So I steal this guy's degree...don't quit your day job at the pharmacy

At least Zu has the wit, you get Socced-hur (here), i pack the kick

Thanks for the compliments, lol.

But good try, it was entertaining. :b:
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby Solace » Jan 4th, '10, 22:30

That was pretty dope, but I don't get the title.
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 5th, '10, 00:23

^ if you're wondering about the $48, its cuz it's 48 lines long
if you're wondering about the rest...idk myself, it just sounded good
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Re: Eat The Beef Alive (The Zu, Spyder, Tunisien $48 Special)

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '10, 03:23

Iight thanks I get it now :y:
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