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Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

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Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 06:35

I come in a ship of gifts from Victoria's secret,
But you ignore me an keep it,
I'm ignoring the ski lift and exploring the deepest of glorious beaches,
I implore you to reach it but I feel so honest spoken,
I've got problems copin when my goddess is so thin,
But my problems are frozen when this model is posin,
Thoughts and spirit broken but her top isn't open,
So I sit and rhyme with the most obvious structure,
Like I probably suffer cause my body was punctured,
And this whole audience wants her,
So I'll probably fuck her like I honestly love her,
Now I'm sittin in bed restless from her best kiss,
Others wanna test it,
Ha, get left with a redish left fist and a deathwish,

Victoria is laughin at the way that I'm acting,
Got my heart in a jar see the way that she's trappin,
It happens she keeps her secret deep in a box,
She sows my mouth shut and ties the bow in a knot

Ms. Lunaverse
Tryin to find worth in these Victoria secret bags,
Trying to find worth but your ignoring my secrets dad,
Everything I ever need you expect me to keep it,
I've only got myself so how you expect me to be shit,
I really need this rap thing to work out,
I'm feeling weak for attracting these words now,
I'm buying these things to hide the fact theres no stopping,
I'd rather rap then act like I like to go shopping,
That I'd rather sit here and rap about shootin the gat,
Then sitting around talkin bout the boy I'm choosin to ask,
Because this is wat I look like beneath these fake clothes,
Beneath the tables I see these fake hoes, these so-called angels,
With high priced bags and spineless men wrapped around there fingers,
Like my pricetags are timeless in fact when my sound lingers,
So I ignore these fakes cause I'm exploring the bleekest conforming like bitches,
Watch out for this Victorias secret cause she is reporting for business.

Victoria is laughin at the way that I'm acting,
Got my heart in a jar see the way that she's trappin,
It happens she keeps her secret deep in a box,
She sows my mouth shut and ties the bow in a knot

Fa-Q
Tell me, what's her secret, is it the smell of her perfume,
Is it Victoria knowing that, eventually hell is her doom,
I can smell the stench, the fornication of this horny nation,
Emits from this strip club, the married husbands the pussy lips rub,
But Victoria, I see her, the heart shaped stage is her thing,
She was a survivor, from at her start she raped at age thirteen,
She's locked in a cage, on her third ring, third husband,
The one that throws her around, and every words cussin,
But she's a survivor, got her thigh of ones,
the smoke prys her lungs, cigarettes, that ties tongues,
She's holding a coffin in her lungs, and dying inside,
She feels like what ever she does, she trying to hide,
Its like Greens her only color, everyday buying her pride,
Her silk hair, has split ends, the guy across the way sit and sends,
Mixed signals, she knows her shame, as she sees his dicks wiggles,
As she removes her clothes, she hears the laughs and all the pricks giggles,
She does it, in hope that one day she's rich and famous,
She knows her heart, grows apart, and she's not a bitch and shameless,
Last edited by Yah-hah on Jan 4th, '10, 11:44, edited 2 times in total.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Victorias Secret

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 07:00

Haha. That's classy. Nice multis, as usual guys. Dope collab. :worship:
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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 07:24

Thanks Fish :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 4th, '10, 11:39

Thanks Guta
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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 11:45

sorry the chorus isnt all that. Forgot I didnt have one till I was postin it and keyed somethin up
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 4th, '10, 14:05

Lol did you censor wiggles in my verse
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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 4th, '10, 14:07

Whaaaat it edited it in my last post...I'm saying wi-ggles and its censoring me
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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Just Silver » Jan 4th, '10, 16:01

Fa-Q wrote:Whaaaat it edited it in my last post...I'm saying wi-ggles and its censoring me

lol i know i complained about w.iggles before

overall really good piece the name is very different and unique


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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby BILI » Jan 4th, '10, 16:17

This was dope guys,I really loved it,nice drop :y:
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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 17:06

Lol Fa-Q I didnt even see that. Thanks Silver and BILI
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Victorias Secret ft. Ms. Lunaverse and Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 9th, '10, 10:51

Haha yeah mine was based on actual stuff that kinda gets me ya know, Yeah I liked both they verses, showed a different element
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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