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Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 5th, '10, 00:15

Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 01:58

2sDay wrote:Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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lmao, where i come from, homey, sucker punches arent respected... and im a waiter, whats ur job?... how would u know if i have a tiny cock or not? peepin through my window?... u tuck asses?... and btw, twiters free, u dont spend paychecks on it... and if wer such an untalented bunch, why did u beg me to get in?... and last but not least, u eat men for lunch? between that, tucking my ass, and talking about my cock, i have to question ur sexuality
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 01:59

Edge wrote:
2sDay wrote:Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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lmao, where i come from, homey, sucker punches arent respected... and im a waiter, whats ur job?... how would u know if i have a tiny cock or not? peepin through my window?... u tuck asses?... and btw, twiters free, u dont spend paychecks on it... and if wer such an untalented bunch, why did u beg me to get in?... and last but not least, u eat men for lunch? between that, tucking my ass, and talking about my cock, i have to question ur sexuality



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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 5th, '10, 01:59

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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 5th, '10, 02:01

classthe_king wrote:
Edge wrote:
2sDay wrote:Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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lmao, where i come from, homey, sucker punches arent respected... and im a waiter, whats ur job?... how would u know if i have a tiny cock or not? peepin through my window?... u tuck asses?... and btw, twiters free, u dont spend paychecks on it... and if wer such an untalented bunch, why did u beg me to get in?... and last but not least, u eat men for lunch? between that, tucking my ass, and talking about my cock, i have to question ur sexuality



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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 5th, '10, 02:20

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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 5th, '10, 02:23

Edge wrote:
2sDay wrote:Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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lmao, where i come from, homey, sucker punches arent respected... and im a waiter, whats ur job?... how would u know if i have a tiny cock or not? peepin through my window?... u tuck asses?... and btw, twiters free, u dont spend paychecks on it... and if wer such an untalented bunch, why did u beg me to get in?... and last but not least, u eat men for lunch? between that, tucking my ass, and talking about my cock, i have to question ur sexuality

I'm sorry. i forgot ur a WAITER from Compton in Compton they don't accept sucker punches.In fact they passed the No Sucker Punch Act a couple years ago. im sorry ur so ghetto plz forgive me. Ur a waiter that itself shouldnt count as job.... go to college and get a degree and be a doctor or something....fucking stupid-ass waiter. I'm just assuming u have a tiny cock because of the way u are. i wouldnt know because u live miles away from me... cuz i live in florida so it's impossible for me through peep through your boxhole(u can't afford a house). No i dont tuck asses but me and my boys can sure make ur ass look like a tucked one after we beat you senselessly. ur stupid about the twitter shit.... u can donate money to twitter.ummmm... at no point did i beg to get in the fucking group. I said that i will talk with smithy to see if he agrees with ur proposal. u said u talked with him and he said that he just wants a group with me. he double-crossed me and entered the group without telling me. i just didnt give a shit at that point. And last but not least, ur one stupid simple minded WAITER and this further proves my point of u no going to college and getting proper education that's why ur a WAITER, by i eat fuckers like you for lunch is i can take u on and that ur worthless to me. ur truly not 18 years old if u dont know that. and homey question my sexuality i dont give a fuck.... i have a beautiful girlfriend and im perfectly straight. making fun of what i assume u have(a tiny cock) i MIGHT be wrong.... and me explaining how if talk the garbage u talk through the safety of what we call a computer monitor over here in the flesh where i live. You will get ur ass whooped or geting beat up so badly that they fold up ur ass. have a good day fucker.
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 5th, '10, 02:26

2sDay wrote:
Edge wrote:
2sDay wrote:Homey, if you saying what you saying over where I live,
They'll catch you in your crib, and they won't forgive,
Beat you for a half block, so bad they give u an ass tuck,
Fuck you up, for being a punk and having a tiny cock,
They'll "serve" u but not gourmet, an ass kicking that lasts all day,
So just fall and pray, that we don't encounter one day, okay?,
Man I'm a young guy, but among my fist and u, y'all gonna get "close",
Better yet close to ur nose, cuz as tension grows, my sensation shows,
To beat you senselessly, cuz people are tough behind a monitor, but yo,
You could be a fluff knitter that spends his life and paycheck on twitter,
Oh wait, that's right your a damn waiter, I'll be under your skin like a splinter,
'Cuz u just triggered 2sDay onto Diss mode, disload all my anger to you,
My rhymes more infectious than the swine flu, gonna make you spew,
Do you have a true clue to what kind of disaster you got yourself into,
Words that equal a sucker punch, Man I eat you fuckers for lunch,
And i don't need your fucking group, I can take on that untalented bunch,

line 3: ass tuck is like saying "tummy tuck" where they practically tuck ur stomach. but this is ass tuck
line 5: i say serve cuz he's a waiter
last line: the untalented bunch is the F&F group(that just split up)

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lmao, where i come from, homey, sucker punches arent respected... and im a waiter, whats ur job?... how would u know if i have a tiny cock or not? peepin through my window?... u tuck asses?... and btw, twiters free, u dont spend paychecks on it... and if wer such an untalented bunch, why did u beg me to get in?... and last but not least, u eat men for lunch? between that, tucking my ass, and talking about my cock, i have to question ur sexuality

I'm sorry. i forgot ur a WAITER from Compton in Compton they don't accept sucker punches.In fact they passed the No Sucker Punch Act a couple years ago. im sorry ur so ghetto plz forgive me. Ur a waiter that itself shouldnt count as job.... go to college and get a degree and be a doctor or something....fucking stupid-ass waiter. I'm just assuming u have a tiny cock because of the way u are. i wouldnt know because u live miles away from me... cuz i live in florida so it's impossible for me through peep through your boxhole(u can't afford a house). No i dont tuck asses but me and my boys can sure make ur ass look like a tucked one after we beat you senselessly. ur stupid about the twitter shit.... u can donate money to twitter.ummmm... at no point did i beg to get in the fucking group. I said that i will talk with smithy to see if he agrees with ur proposal. u said u talked with him and he said that he just wants a group with me. he double-crossed me and entered the group without telling me. i just didnt give a shit at that point. And last but not least, ur one stupid simple minded WAITER and this further proves my point of u no going to college and getting proper education that's why ur a WAITER, by i eat fuckers like you for lunch is i can take u on and that ur worthless to me. ur truly not 18 years old if u dont know that. and homey question my sexuality i dont give a fuck.... i have a beautiful girlfriend and im perfectly straight. making fun of what i assume u have(a tiny cock) i MIGHT be wrong.... and me explaining how if talk the garbage u talk through the safety of what we call a computer monitor over here in the flesh where i live. You will get ur ass whooped or geting beat up so badly that they fold up ur ass. have a good day fucker.
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 5th, '10, 02:27

u act like too much of a pussy to live in a hood homey... :whistle:
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 02:31

i live in compton? thats news to me
and i do go to collage dumbass lmao
hardcore miami... gotta watch out for dem sharks in the water
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 02:33

than again, in miami there are some hardcore gangstas... i mean DJ Kalad is mad gangsta... same with officer rickky... good thing NY is pussy :y:
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 5th, '10, 02:38

moving to the second most dangerous city because of a college, for about a year and come back to NY

http://www.walletpop.com/insurance/most ... ous-states

NY isnt there because of the crime rate. that they know of... and florida is like 8, 4? :unsure:

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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 02:38

Coleon wrote:
Edge wrote:hardcore miami... gotta watch out for dem sharks in the water


lmao who's sig is this going in?


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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 5th, '10, 02:40

Edge wrote:than again, in miami there are some hardcore gangstas... i mean DJ Kalad is mad gangsta... same with officer rickky... good thing NY is pussy :y:

I live in the south beach area which is quite dangerous at times.... i wont lie though, im not poor, i have a fucking computer.... im a lil in between lower middle class and middle class. no need to be fake.... but i've heard shots fired, people dying in front of my eyes, and i definatly have beat the fuck out of trash talking faggots..... but hey its ur choice to believe me.
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Re: Sucker Punch(Edge Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 5th, '10, 02:44

2sDay wrote:
Edge wrote:than again, in miami there are some hardcore gangstas... i mean DJ Kalad is mad gangsta... same with officer rickky... good thing NY is pussy :y:

I live in the south beach area which is quite dangerous at times.... i wont lie though, im not poor, i have a fucking computer.... im a lil in between lower middle class and middle class. no need to be fake.... but i've heard shots fired, people dying in front of my eyes, and i definatly have beat the fuck out of trash talking faggots..... but hey its ur choice to believe me.
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