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The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 02:08

Shit bigger then just CW :smoking:


(Mc Zu)
I heard like a group of animals people praying
As I spread my wings the feeble day sins
Were as clear as the feathers yet a lethal shame in
This world caused sequels to be maintained in
The same exact frame as the previous enslavement
So each day’s end has the same end and
I wish people would preach for enlightenment
Rays of light enlightening the innocent
In a sense this torment is soul bend
Car accidents act like a door mat to heaven
Or hell.. Either on the count of seven
Or.. Oh well, neither amount to being a reverend
Don’t know how to run a house like Rev Run
Some should be ashamed on this core’s planet
They’re all losing brothers like poor Janet
The floor’s tanned with this young man’s blood
His car looking like the-rake, no young money squad
His son’s tears, are a fountain up here
Yeah, here, we’re the sun’s peers
Bystanders all with different stories to tell
Poor train conductor thinking he bound to hell
Sinking in misery alongside the sky lights
Now this is what happened in hindsight...

(Mc Anonymous)
Freeze frame, it was dark, spitting bars, ripping jaws
lifting all of my weight, It's late, while driving cars
my fate, is flying far, blinding light in my vision
logic took an intermission, I bursted like an ignition
and tried to get by, I pulled the clutch and I drive
I hope to survive, yet my mullet crushed by the size
of the track, attacked, senses flickering, I'm whispering
my back is cracked, light is entering and slithering
the fact is that, I know my life is at its end
it's wack, I act, that it is right for life to bend
I hear acoustics, I try to move, it's useless
the noises are ruthless, I think the truth is
that death is soothing, breath is losing, two inch
away from the train, insane, brain computes this
came so stupid, bruises, gone and smouldered
with life in a fire, and my soul still colder

(Sentus)
I get up at fuckin 4 am, god I fuckin hate my life
That's maybe why I had a meeting with blades n knives
All the days n lies have passed but fuck it, I'll go to work
And drive that damn train around until I go berserk
My shoulders hurt, I made a stop at the coffee cup
A sloppy fuck, I'll keep eating doughnuts till my top erupts
Walking sucks, but eventually I arrive at the station
I wanna get it over with, ive been deprived of my patience
I ride over nations but now im on my way back
But I think I see a car driving out on the train track
In an insane act he bravely tried to beat me cross
But he'll never make it, his car will get completely squashed
I had to sweetly watch, cause nothing could prevent it
I beeped the horn but his jeep was torn into the cement it
Was imprinted into my mind, that shocking scene
Is destroying my conscience like a haunting dream

(Solace)
And the morning rose, cold wind currents are soaring close,
Day had passed crazy fast, it was only about 4:40 though,
Decided to get a drive around the town so the minutes fly,
I look at the timid sky and it's telling me something isn't right,
Wish for a brightened wall but the night is dull, steady though,
Meanwhile I keep speed high and now I'm heading home,
This man in front of me isn't cunning see, he's on train tracks,
No space ahead, this makes him dead and that's the main fact,
The train, it's approaching fast, tight space so he's trapped,
What can one do, is this just a dream from my morning nap?
Chaos intrudes my sight, I was too late when I yell for help,
Eyes are now a ruined type, this amount of guilt I've never felt,
Could've died I should've tried, wish he had an angel with him,
In an instant his face imprinted in mind just makes it twisted,
Car upside down, body splattered, train conductor runs for aid,
And this man you see was family and should've seen another day.

(Spyder)
Its late, im worrying my father met his fate
Stoppin thoughts to meditate to lessen hate.
The last words I spoke were never come back
Take your sweater and bag you weren't ever my dad.
Saw him get up and pack, grab his car keys
Headed to the bar see, for him it's easy to discard me.
Im largely, feelin guilty but to hell with him missin
Sit back, relax, flip on the television
I see an accident its tragic, can't believe it's happened
Crossed over the tracks, tried to speed right past him.
They reveal my father to be the victim, had a fifth in him
I feel like my words he heard caused the collision.
Why did he have to die, he wasn’t that bad a guy
Its sad cause I, feel like im the fuckin master mind,
Behind his fate, please god rewind today
Ill see you again dad trust me ill find a way.
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 02:55

thanks Cole :D
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Robbie G » Jan 5th, '10, 02:58

I thought it was pretty good, but like it's been said too long.

I'll be dropping my 5 Star General diss shortly.
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby gutawafang » Jan 5th, '10, 03:03

Class, you're Sentus, I assume? :unsure:

Anyways, I think Solace's was the best here. :y:

And I like the overall concept. Everyone stayed on subject. Nice. :b:
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 03:04

Robbie G wrote:I thought it was pretty good, but like it's been said too long.

I'll be dropping my 5 Star General diss shortly.


why U dissing us :unsure:
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '10, 03:22

Damn that was tight everyone. Thanks Cole. DG man DG ;)

Shady Babie 'member our old joke beef :laughing:

You dissing us could be a ressurection :o
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 03:24

Solace wrote:Damn that was tight everyone. Thanks Cole. DG man DG ;)

Shady Babie 'member our old joke beef :laughing:

You dissing us could be a ressurection :o


just another cat down like we the humaine society... shit thats dope :whistle:

and it GD.. not DG
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '10, 03:26

Spyder wrote:
Solace wrote:Damn that was tight everyone. Thanks Cole. DG man DG ;)

Shady Babie 'member our old joke beef :laughing:

You dissing us could be a ressurection :o


just another cat down like we the humaine society... shit thats dope :whistle:

and it GD.. not DG

Ah yeah sorry. Oh well, it's not my group anyways.
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 03:27

true that
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 04:49

Thanks for the feed :worship:

And yes i'm Sentus.


Did everyone understand what it was about alright? :sweating:
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby mcZu » Jan 6th, '10, 02:24

Thanks for the feed y'all. :b:
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 6th, '10, 08:32

Yeah yall pretty dope man. Nice vibe :y:
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 19:45

Thanks yah
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby mcZu » Jan 10th, '10, 00:24

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it.
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Re: The 5 Star Generals- Vantage Point

Postby Spyder » Jan 10th, '10, 01:04

thanks errrrbody
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