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must get beyond this

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 21:37

i pitty those with fucken shitty flows
every city knows, about my witty blows
so if u wanna find out, go ahead and name drop
go and call the police, just another slain cop
respect my reign, turnin tears to raindrops
feelin energized, at least til cocain stops
flowin thru my blood, snowing turns to flood
im the lonely flower, growing through the mud
cant stop these thoughts from floatin in my head
still dont know how, to cope when things are said
my mind is so spacious, grind is vivacious
i might help u once, but i am not gracious
people hide two faces, seems everyones a fraud
turn my strides to races, flashin guns to god
asking him for help, to make his people honest
im happy where i am, but must get beyond this
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby Robbie G » Jan 5th, '10, 21:43

Pretty good drop. I really liked the flow of the first few lines. :y:
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 21:45

thanks man :y:
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 5th, '10, 22:39

long live NY.. lol nice flow, lines, and overall, nice drop :worship:
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby Edge » Jan 5th, '10, 23:38

bullet_boy46 wrote:long live NY.. lol nice flow, lines, and overall, nice drop :worship:


thanks man... appreciate the feed :y:

just noticed ur sig :beerchug:
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 6th, '10, 08:31

Yeah man first couple lines' flow was on lock man. Good shit bro keep at it
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: must get beyond this

Postby Edge » Jan 6th, '10, 17:56

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah man first couple lines' flow was on lock man. Good shit bro keep at it


i will man thanks :y:
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