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You`re Done(Diss)

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You`re Done(Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 6th, '10, 15:58

Macbaby its time to end your fuckin fake ass
I`ll attack suddenly,like a snake in a grass
Lil bitch,I`m gonna have to kill your ass
Dont fuck wit me or I`ll reveal your past
God gave you life but I can take it fast
See bitch I can go crazy and make a blast

Bumm,lets go,Ima destroy this bitch!!!!

I`m hotter then your dick when you talk to Pink
Your fuckin obsessed,someone call the shrink
I`m dissin you cause you`re a bitch,so dont be surprised
Your tr shoutout,I was like what?Is he paralyzed?
Only have 16 friends on Face cause nobody likes you
Straight in your heart,I love how does this strikes you
Act like a player,but only boobs you saw are your mothers
You probably have not one,but more fathers
Yeah,your mother is a hoe,bitch its time for you to go
I dont wanna end this,I wanna rhyme for you some mo`
Act like a pimp,but in reality you`re scared to get outa house
Only thing you fuck is your keyboard and ya mouse
You`re fuckin fake,all you got are stolen rhymes
So dont even try to respond wit some stolen lines


No hard feelings towards Pink :flower:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby shadyfreakzul » Jan 6th, '10, 16:20

really dope.i wish we could battle.never battled but want to battle.
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

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like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 6th, '10, 17:16

shadyfreakzul wrote:really dope.i wish we could battle.never battled but want to battle.

Thx man,I cant battle now,maybe in a few days :flower:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby Spyder » Jan 6th, '10, 19:46

shadyfreakzul wrote:really dope.i wish we could battle.never battled but want to battle.


dude you need to calm down, you ask repeatedly for people to battle you
the day will come :whistle:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby Wic Kid » Jan 6th, '10, 19:54

PINK wrote:What have I done? :'(

Women... :shakehead:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 7th, '10, 02:08

that was cute :smoking:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 7th, '10, 14:03

macdaddy019967 wrote:that was cute :smoking:

I`m glad you think its cute,cause next time I`m gonna put everything I got

@other people,dont spam,feed :coffee:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 7th, '10, 14:08

PINK wrote:
BILI wrote:
macdaddy019967 wrote:that was cute :smoking:

I`m glad you think its cute,cause next time I`m gonna put everything I got

@other people,dont spam,feed :coffee:

I don't get why was I in there?

It hes nothing to do wit you,but whenever you post something he`s there to qoute you and say something,get it :flower:
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Re: You`re Done(Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 8th, '10, 04:35

hahhahaaha! I find this hilarious man! In a good way! HAHA. Pretty nice. :)
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