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Poetry of the Unemployed

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Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Just Silver » Jan 7th, '10, 01:52

Disabled to the force of the public works
stores himself inside with slummed efforts
and upon this turf its urban earth where heathens were
descended thirst from a meal of the birth
that had been a way to get high and rest his head
now turn to just revive and guess who's dead
the unemployable unclear stares unavoidable
"wear" the youths innocents definitely unportable
disease left me these sick jokes with no punches
abrupt with self hate and combustion some lovin
for this permanent perverse contortions
serving wits learning with my own known importance
shown corporate hate hippie self endorses
smoke weed all day staying dormant
fraying others because of their way to death
the road to success under the high nest
welcome the highness of your highness
marijuana mayor smoke and get by it
forget what jocks or cheerleaders say
they can all suck my ass and get fucked in the face
busting an 8 crushed with the fate of an unlucky maze
stuck into raves of real happy dumbness
peel black shells of the dead and gumless
that leaves a bloodstain on the industry
wonder why work is not into me...
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 7th, '10, 02:33

Damn Silv...I didn't know you really did multis but fuck...that shit was good...bravo
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Just Silver » Jan 7th, '10, 02:40

Fa-Q wrote:Damn Silv...I didn't know you really did multis but fuck...that shit was good...bravo

thanks guy trying to get back in the groove
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 03:27

Told you he had multis. Good shit silver like to see you workin now a days lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Enimee » Jan 7th, '10, 10:41

def dope, i like the adjectives and versatile multiplication of rhymes ;p but yeah the inbetween the lines message was superb as well very good topic well executed CLAP CLAP BRAVO BRAVO
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby GhanjaGod24 » Jan 8th, '10, 00:13

That shit was amazin :y:
"Side effects is similar to sugar pill
Who eva go next on the mic, he put a booger ew
And mad his exit on some calm shit
Begged em' on the regular for kegs of more Vomitspit."
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Re: Poetry of the Unemployed

Postby Edge » Jan 9th, '10, 21:49

nice multis and drop, man :y:
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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