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Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 01:44

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8DKu5zUsfg

(Mc Zu)
They try to hit me up like Tupac, when you jot
Cuz, you'll see the difference 'cause when Zu jots
People could really swear that you bombed first
You oughta play-back my song like a brittany spears concert
Just to catch what I said in a song, word...
I spit so much heat people think my tounge hurts
You know why I got broken wings? I'm running south
Just quit that homo music, it's never coming out
It's like I sell-a-bit, y'all can't fuck with me
Zu and Sentus molesting a beat from fifty
Pure skill, we're like an oxymoron, luckfree
Haters? They'll be running back like Eldra Buckley
You'll see defeat, lack of chinese footwear, you're ugly
I flow cold, from now on refer to me as sub Z

We're Generals in line,
Generally entwined when we write[2x]

(Sentus)
A trip back to your level is what my flow needs
Cause my rhymes are so fly im gettin a nose bleed
So proceed to talk shit, I ain't afraid to push a man
You wanna rap, but you blow so that means you just a fan
You think your smart, but you don't wanna get in beef
We'll see when this punch knocks out your wisdom teeth
I'm spittin heat, you try to step to me but you remain
Cause you slippin more than Dre on nothin but a G Thang
I began this battle, but frankly I would rather box em then rap
Your fan's are so bored when I kicked it I chopped em in half
Drop em and laugh, you know the tracks im bound to wreck
You couldn't hang with the generals if you were around our neck
What I got to say, I'm takin it to the older days
Finally I'm back like underneath your shoulder blades
You don't know the ways I got you, you one to studder
To me, ya girl like a secret agent, the way she under covers

We're Generals in line,
Generally entwined when we write[2x]


Props to Coleon on my verse :worship:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 01:51

Zu, love the sell-a-bit line :worship:
your verse was goodn, nothing reaaaally stuck out. but i liked it :y:
Class, i see your working on punchlines and wordplay
gettin help from Coleon :smoking:
verse was alright, some nice punches and all that
nothing that stuck out to me but your getting there :y:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 02:00

somehow im not suprised :shifty:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 02:03

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:gettin help from Coleon :smoking:


I only wrote like half of it :shifty:


Zu wrote the other half :'(
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby mcZu » Jan 8th, '10, 02:14

Thanks y'all.

And, yes I did. :shifty:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 03:09

All i want is to get fed like a fat guy
But as soon as you open the page you get a black eye
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 03:47

Real nice collaboration, I'd say Sentus did the better verse here but both verses are great. And you listening to Bekay now? That's dope, he's real good :y: Stay repping.
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 15:46

Thanks Solace :worship:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby mcZu » Jan 10th, '10, 00:25

Thanks y'all, 'preciate it. :b:
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Re: Mc Zu & Sentus- Generals in Lines

Postby classthe_king » Jan 10th, '10, 18:35

Bump :shakehead:
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