God amongst men

[Yah-hah]

If only the strongest survive then when I'm gone it's a lie,
I dedicate this to the time of every artist thats tried,
The braveheart of my tribe,
I sharpen the knife takin my arm and carvin the side,
With the initials of every artist that died,
The markings I scribe darken the sky,
Then I dance, causing the rain to double the earths water supply,
Scarring ya pride,
You swear you hard and your army will ride,
But the only time you bargain ya life is crossin ya heart when you lie,
I, breathe deep take oxygen in,
I need beef, I only feed meat to the monster within,
You knee deep the seeweed done got you again,
I see the world as it is, you see things with a positive spin,
You can't touch me with where my hands have probably been,
Cause my mind and murder is like a magnets opposite end
I've got the cockiest grin try to copy my sins,
You're not in my skin,
I'm a motherfuckin God amongst men,


Kind of a little keystyle thing. Made a full song but my girl stepped on the chord and it turned off without saving. So I coulndt remember anything lol. So here's wat ya get. She bought me ice cream though so it's all good.

[Edge]

too bad she stepped on the chord, would like to see the full version lol

this is a good example of why i dont think structure matters all the time... ur lines werent the same length yet it flowed perfectly for me... and the multi were sick... nice drop

[Fa-Q]

Damn Jus, wy do I regret bringing you to TR...lol jk naw man this piece is good...its actually borderline storytelling but its really good...and foreal, tawna just stompin on cords huh?

[neversnooze]

damn this was dope. when you wrote about tribe, i can tell you had knowledge about it. you werent babbling and forcing your rhymes which i enjoyed. it was very good but the only negative to this was the structure could use some work.

[Yah-hah]

Thanks to everyone that gave me feed. lol grif She was like telling me how irresponsible I was for not keeping my room clean. lol Yeah thanks edge, I am like the president of "Fuck structure inc" lmao. Thank neversnooze.

[Edge]

Thanks to everyone that gave me feed. lol grif She was like telling me how irresponsible I was for not keeping my room clean. lol Yeah thanks edge, I am like the president of "Fuck structure inc" lmao. Thank neversnooze.

lmao word... theres times where i feel it flows better w/o good structure and to me flow>structure

[Yah-hah]

Yeah, I have a different flow than alot of people. Like I'll speed some lines up and slow some down, a bit confusing on text but its all good, the multis help keep pace lol

[Edge]

Yeah, I have a different flow than alot of people. Like I'll speed some lines up and slow some down, a bit confusing on text but its all good, the multis help keep pace lol

i hate that you cant fully understand the flow through text lol

[Yah-hah]

Yeah ima be gettin my mic in a week or so so..........

[Edge]

Yeah ima be gettin my mic in a week or so so..........

nice wel get to hear some audio

[Yah-hah]

Yeah ima be gettin my mic in a week or so so..........

nice wel get to hear some audio

Finally

[Yah-hah]

^

[Yah-hah]

Bumpin

[Just Silver]

at first thought it was the topical would work very well if it was

[Yah-hah]

Lol Naw I wrote it in bits and finally put it all together...then my gilr stepped on my computer chord and lost the other verses