Straight Outta Staten - Edge, Bullet Boy, GhanjaGod

[Edge]

Edge:
I don’t respect u nice, and so your neck I slice
Than I just sex ya wife, coming with tecks and knifes
U better check the mic, bomb the stage, hit the deck for life
Pic up the cube and eject the dice, prayin for three 6s
Loving the way that alcohol and all the trees mixes
If I don’t get u right away, the knife eventually transfixes
I don’t mean to scare u and just leave u shitless
But I unwrap ya skin, like a gift on Christmas
Cause seeing u dead, is what my eternal bliss is
So next time u leave ya house, make sure to kiss the misses
Lemme see the beat, so I could take my shits and pisses
Like not being malleable, u don’t know what the twist is
So don’t get it twisted, cause even u could get bent too
And nobodys gunna know, to what hood I sent u

GanjaGod24:
I was put on this earth to be a fucking rebel
Guns and blunts, lead to tangos with the devil
As I ignite both, it's hotter than a light bulb
Took a sworn oath, to put the dogs out cold
Add the knife to your throat, then divide your head
Throw you over my boat, so you won't rise from the dead
Just stole a red car, now I'm going to Vegas
Doing a 100 on the tar, to be rich and famous
There can't be cause, without the effect
An outlaw to the grave, I stand erect.
When I get arrested, they give me visiting rights
Mary Jane protested, she took me back to those hazy nights
Got life in jail for the man I decapitated
Dig a hole in the wall with a spoon to get emancipated
On the run again, only weapons a fucking pen
Bring you to a zoo, trap you in the lion's den
If they don't tear you up, my saw will
Just killed Phil now I'm chasin you down the hill
My massacre is finished, the murdering is over
After I bag your body parts, I throw you over the cliffs of dover

Bullet Boy:
watch your ass gasp from hurtful exasperation
these fags facin elimination by verbal assination
its a shame when an lame has an active imagination
beat me, battlin ya can gimme wackness contamination
you still piss in da bed and need plastic mattress lamination
your mad n shaken cause you got no right to hold mics
u got no life, you shouldnt of won a sole fight, on gold mic
you got no hype and you flow n write weak and defensenless
im lyrically relentless, my sentences will beat you senseless
yo defeat commences cause your usin a wack flow
in fact you, you couldnt spit if you were chewin tabacco
you crack ho, just no show you know i show no pity
ill lay you flat on yo chest like a ho wit no titties
no really, im not here to kill or hurt your spirits
but you need a sign that reads will work for lyrics
your first appearence on g mic was weak wit no style
now, finish reading yo worse defeatand then delete yo profile

[bullet_boy46]

solace, i dont wanna be a asshole like daddycoco but look.. i remember he did this to you. he was like LOOK SEE ITS PROOF!!!...but its fo real. search my verse on google


http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 202AA9oVvb

fire from staten

[GhanjaGod24]

Edge your verse is dope, Bullet your shit is amazing it made me laugh a few times, and mine could use improvement but I'm still a beginner

The S.I Crew haha

[bullet_boy46]

Edge your verse is dope, Bullet your shit is amazing it made me laugh a few times, and mine could use improvement but I'm still a beginner

The S.I Crew haha

lol true true.. it isnt amazing i was in writers block. listened to rengade.. just started thinking of ion, then i started to rhyme thanks though.. but your you dope for beginner... if you want to start a crew? be prepared... lol

[Edge]

writers block comes when u try to write... just sit back, listen to some instrumentals of hot beats and let the thoughts flow... this is a nice drop guys... GG i saw a lot of improvement from ur last drop and BB this is my favorite u ever dropped so keep at it... maybe we could eventually form a group "Shaolin Soldiers" haha

we need some feed

[bullet_boy46]

BUMP

[Fa-Q]

Pretty good guys...good structure and multis...but what all you guys can improve on is vocab and just plain spell your verses write...and don't use "u" for you...it makes it so much easier to read...plus it looks good...keep it up yall

[bullet_boy46]

thanks FA-Q bump

[Edge]

thanks for the feed

[bullet_boy46]

bump

[Spyder]

you guys are getting better, and i can see your willingness to get better so i like that

only thing is ill go one by one

Edge - pretty basic rhyming. you had nice multies but a small vocabulary

GG - your need multies, i saw a few but other than that it lack, and basic rhyming

Bullet - i see you increeced your vobad so kudos, but make sure you dont rhyme just ro rhyme
alot of things seemed forced.

make sure you guys rhyme in couplets as well. so and even number of lines rhyme
makes the flow alot better

[Yah-hah]

Yeah like they said vocab but BB had good vocab. I'm diggin it Edge found out them multis and cant stop Dug GG's verse too, not many mutlis but who the fuck cares I like it and best from BB yet. Good to see some youngin comin up Keep workin homies

[Edge]

Yeah like they said vocab but BB had good vocab. I'm diggin it Edge found out them multis and cant stop Dug GG's verse too, not many mutlis but who the fuck cares I like it and best from BB yet. Good to see some youngin comin up Keep workin homies

thanks man, i never fully knew multis and now that i do i love them lol

[bullet_boy46]

thanks

[Yah-hah]

No problem.sometimes yall worry bout the vets kinda breathin down ya necks sometimes, just do you and have fun with this stuff. I mean it always gotta be so serious ya know have some fun man, get better and stay dope ya know. Much love to yall man