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a quick 14

Postby Edge » Jan 9th, '10, 22:24

make ya family blue cause ur left red, I aint talkin crips and bloods
Im talkin ra-dic-ulous (ridiculous), gimmie the mic so I could rip shit up
Using the same razor to split ya mug, as I used to split the dutch
Im getting tired with this hoe, gimmie another bitch to fuck
I got clips to tuck, better get ur pump thinking u could try on my team
Stabbin u in ur eye, spleen, heart, brain, lung, cuz murder is my theme
Look man, I know on the mic your tryin to spit ya thang mean
But if you keep acting up, I decapitate your body like gang green
I steal ya dang queen, right before I claim my rightful crown
It seems like every verse I spit is full of delightful sounds
U beg to differ? I grab my bat all u hear is frightful pounds
“Best Up-and-Coming Rapper”? I like how the title sounds
My styles sound, sounder than anyone, yea man, I banter yours
I leave u red and bloated but I aint talkin bout Santa Clause

feed appreciated :8)
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: a quick 14

Postby Just Silver » Jan 9th, '10, 22:52

multis could be better but nice drop
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Re: a quick 14

Postby Edge » Jan 9th, '10, 23:53

thanks man
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Re: a quick 14

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 9th, '10, 23:58

as I used to split the dutch
Im getting tired with this hoe, gimmie another bitch to fuck


took it as a slant rhyme...not your best..but i liked it alot :flower:
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Re: a quick 14

Postby Edge » Jan 10th, '10, 21:44

bump :sweating:
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