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A Verse

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 10th, '10, 17:38

a verse for my new song
,all feeds will be returned



u dream those dreams,u"v seen these screens,
it bleeds it seems,cuz i hear "please" screams
on me you can lean,i'v been on tossed scences
My Life is Like a Queen,Whos Lost In Between
Cant You See what i mean?its just fair to lie
i stare at your eye...so prepare to die
try lookin at the sky,and ask God Why
while pussy i smoke u ,your ass got high
hide?u push to me choke you?,i'll make u Slut Cry
u Would Pray For ur Life,cuz ill stay with this knife
inspite,its not right,its a fight,so Play Quite
my life is like a lyric,i know you may bite
i shine when i spit it,you know i spray light,
you might become blind,its not nice for ur eyes
ice and fire combined,its hot to just slice twice
My Music,you refuse it?you'r stupid n confused!
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Re: A Verse

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 10th, '10, 21:32

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Re: A Verse

Postby Arrinef » Jan 10th, '10, 21:35

damn..............

thats deep
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Re: A Verse

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 21:45

crazy multis in beginning some seem stressed though

when i first saw you made something i thought it was going to be a diss to BB

shouldv'e been longer IMO

Overall great multi piece
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Re: A Verse

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 10th, '10, 22:34

Just Silver wrote:crazy multis in beginning some seem stressed though

when i first saw you made something i thought it was going to be a diss to BB
shouldv'e been longer IMO

Overall great multi piece

:tapping: :tapping: :tapping: sick multis
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Re: A Verse

Postby Arrinef » Jan 10th, '10, 22:36

on a second note,

you fuckin won my respect with that shit tuna :y:

we gotta team up one day homie
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Re: A Verse

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 10th, '10, 23:35

ArrineF wrote:on a second note,

you fuckin won my respect with that shit tuna :y:

we gotta team up one day homie

thanks man :worship: cool :smoking:
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Re: A Verse

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 12th, '10, 01:43

my life is like a lyric,i know you may bite
i shine when i spit it,you know i spray light

i liked that shit right there^ :smoking:
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Re: A Verse

Postby gutawafang » Jan 12th, '10, 02:07

It's pretty creepy. LOL.

this line especially:
hide?u push to me choke you?,i'll make u Slut Cry

it's pretty good. I need to hear audio to see how it flows man. ;)
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Re: A Verse

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 12th, '10, 22:42

gutawafang wrote:It's pretty creepy. LOL.

this line especially:
hide?u push to me choke you?,i'll make u Slut Cry

it's pretty good. I need to hear audio to see how it flows man. ;)

u'll hear it when i post my song feat axd :smoking:
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Re: A Verse

Postby Edge » Jan 13th, '10, 00:13

some of the rhymes were basic but the multis and flow were really nice man, i liked this :y:
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