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Pandora's Page

Postby mcZu » Jan 13th, '10, 02:11

This is food for thought while my memories starve
You can’t save a relation, not when you break the memory card
Bridge in sight, I can’t brake, the end or thee start
You may chose where we take the agony apart
Adding me in your life again will result in a negative
Asking me to look you up like me solving your next trick
People told me I should just move to the next trick
Though I found me a lady, so my luck ran well
Maybe, it’ll be more, but for now we’re just friends Danielle
I’m a man, can I cry? Well it seems I can yell
I’m not into undercover shots, I aint Sean Bell
Though I’ll leave the game crying, ‘cause I’m armed well
I don’t want to name names, but.. Oh, well
You know who you are, a backstabber in levis, so
People think it’s the rise of the Cobra, I aint G.I Joe
But I’ll survive, got that Travis Barker mentality
I’m cold, got that sub zero savage parker fatality
I stick to my words, look, you should pay homage
I mean, I’m a standout, if I may be honest
I’ll probably never fit in, I feel like a shady Amish
I might not be rich, but I won’t fall like after august
You can buy books, but, see, you can never buy knowledge...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Pandora's Page

Postby classthe_king » Jan 13th, '10, 02:44

Really nice piece zu. As usual the wordplay is off the wall. Loved this line
But I’ll survive, got that Travis Barker mentality
I’m cold, got that sub zero savage parker fatality
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Pandora's Page

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 13th, '10, 03:16

Wow Zu I liked this...the first line had me hooked...and you UPed your multis...bravo Zu
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Re: Pandora's Page

Postby Emadyville » Jan 13th, '10, 03:41

yo man this was a nice read, flowed well, rhymed well, and i loved the ending line, very poetic :y:
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Postby gutawafang » Jan 13th, '10, 03:42

Loved the second line. Nice punchline man. :y:

I’m a man, can I cry? Well it seems I can yell :y:

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Re: Pandora's Page

Postby mcZu » Jan 13th, '10, 11:17

Thanks guys, appreciate it. :b:
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Postby Yah-hah » Jan 13th, '10, 11:25

YEah man dope shit as always. Couple really sick lines man, imagery is awesome :y:
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Postby mcZu » Jan 13th, '10, 11:32

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it man.
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Re: Pandora's Page

Postby mcZu » Jan 14th, '10, 20:39

B to the UMP.
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