Death Of Hip Hop

[Tranquil]

I rote this over the D.O.A. beat:

this is death of hip hop,
lucky i came up before, then i sat down and watched it all flip flop,
what am i gonna do to save it,
cant do nothing, coz im not like king David,
i only got respect to a few veterans,
who didnt turn wack, after a few millions,
and i dont give a fuck, what u cunts say,
imma still bump music till my dying day,
even if the young fellows lookin at me strange,
i aint gonna pussy out and go change,
i aint gonna rearrange my set list,
even if you put a gun to my head, im still gonna resist,
i am 100 percent loyal to my music,
and if you try take it from me, man i will prove it,
coz theres nothing worse then a souja boy song,
grow a set man, take off that fucking thong,
coz your voice is so fucked up and high pitched,
you wanna be the best rapper, more like the best bitch,
so just do us a favor and step away from the mic,
mother fucker just do it, even if you dont like,

It only took me like 4 mins, so dont be to harsh, lol

[shadyfreakzul]

pretty dope.i also did one but with a lil bit of lil waynes flow.

spit flows on my chin call me moron
am a beast in the bible have got 4 horns
spit flows on my chin am a retard
with insane lyrics call me bizarre
i kill djs on their own beat
and bury rappers on their own shit
this aint no joke u gotta trust me
or i'ma beat your ass like a jealous HusB
coming out from another planet
while niggas starve like their mother planned it
make them loose weight like the sauna
make them loo like they were starved by thier mama
hit you with sick flows till your head burst
beefing with me is like em beefing with fred durst.

it took me few minutes to write this lol.feedbacks will be appreciated

[Tranquil]

pretty dope.i also did one but with a lil bit of lil waynes flow.

spit flows on my chin call me moron
am a beast in the bible have got 4 horns
spit flows on my chin am a retard
with insane lyrics call me bizarre
i kill djs on their own beat
and bury rappers on their own shit
this aint no joke u gotta trust me
or i'ma beat your ass like a jealous HusB
coming out from another planet
while ***** starve like their mother planned it
make them loose weight like the sauna
make them loo like they were starved by thier mama
hit you with sick flows till your head burst
beefing with me is like em beefing with fred durst.

it took me few minutes to write this lol.feedbacks will be appreciated

Maybe we should collab

[shadyfreakzul]

ok am open dude just pm me and we talk right.