Punches and Multis

[Fa-Q]

You couldn't draw a crowd even if you were an artist,
Valivitorian of retards of course your the smartest,
Your a son of a gun and you still aint bright,
They'd still throw your black ass in jail,
Even If you paint it white,
See, I'll pick the worst song of all time, and make the song play,
I'm like carpet, I look bad, if you
rub me the wrong way,
Bitch, its sad but you're just like a poor bull, always seein red,
I'm on your wifes mind, fuckin your whores skull, with me in bed,
Its like I'm a pissed fat person, bent outta shape,
I asked hell, have BTK teach me how to rape,
You got fired from the bike company cause you can't handle bars,
So you had to steal Saturn's rings, as if your a vandal of stars,
But the real scandal is mars, who got a spouse,
Took a shit on her lips, then called her a potty mouth,
Even if you were Hanes, you couldn't do one push up right,
And your boxer briefs are like George in '08, Bush up tight,

[Spyder]

not your normal cup of tea

umm it was decent...
i thought most of the wordplay was average
and i thought the punches were weakish

nothing bad, but nothing good...

i have deff seen better from you

[Fa-Q]

Yea Spyder, thanks for the feed. When I post these little verses...it means its a throwaway verse...so just a buncha punches I couldn't use anywhere

[Emadyville]

Yea Spyder, thanks for the feed. When I post these little verses...it means its a throwaway verse...so just a buncha punches I couldn't use anywhere

Well in that case


Haha yo it was fun to read, the first line I thought was good but it kinda struck me as odd not to say the artist-draw a crowd thing differently, idk I felt it was a dope metaphor just used weakly. The carpet line was funny so idk, I enjoyed it, good thing this was throwaway tho

[Just Silver]

very different punches

i liked the potty mouth one lol overall not my cup of

but its still good 3 worrships out of 5

[Fa-Q]

Hahah thanks Emvill and Silv...and how do you guys not like the Bush line lol...I was aroused when I thought of that

[Fa-Q]

Hahah thanks Clarky...

[Spyder]

ight word
then ill be anxious to see the piece that didnt fit