Mr. Punchlines

by **Strictt Ame** » Jan 17th, '10, 17:49

Get your facts right, Im ill with flows
Punches go good I could be "outta state" and still "hit home"
You aint never seen lines this clean
So when it comes to rhymes I’ll "always be straight", "9:15"
Flaunt on tracks, but privately stress
Cuz I have trouble "walkin the PC line", no "sobriety test"
I spit a sickenin sound from my teeth
And leave emcees "full of new cuts" like an "album release"
Im a beast, prey flea as I crawl
Such "an animal" goin against me would get "PETA" involved
Nothin compares to the shit Im wreckin
You wont need to "check ya voice mail" to "get the message"
I tend to spit verses that offend the kids
We’re not in the "same boat", Ive got better penman"ship"
I got a vicious bite, you tame when barkin
Not "standin on department stores" when I say "Ame’s on Target"
Im too sleek with rhyme schemes
I can put you in the "ER Son" faster than countin to "3 in Chinese"*

*Look up chinese numbers..1-E, 2-R, 3-Son

by **Emadyville** » Jan 17th, '10, 18:02

Strictt Ame wrote:Get your facts right, Im ill with flows
Punches go good I could be "outta state" and still "hit home"

You aint never seen lines this clean
So when it comes to rhymes I’ll "always be straight", "9:15"

I got a vicious bite, you tame when barkin
Not "standin on department stores" when I say "Ame’s on Target"

Those 3 I really liked ^ especially the 9:15 one, the PETA one I thought was kinda corny, and album-cuts one I've heard before.

by **Spyder** » Jan 17th, '10, 19:52

thought it was alright, thought some of hem were ok
and others were a little corny as emady said

would like to see what you have other than a punches piece :y:

by **Emadyville** » Jan 18th, '10, 04:44

Nah I was being serious lol, why would i lie to the man :confusion:

by **Emadyville** » Jan 18th, '10, 04:50

Coleon wrote:
Emadyville wrote:Nah I was being serious lol, why would i lie to the man

you not but I'm just saying the average TR punchline is garbage and this was pretty solid

o yeah good point, what I said is still what I meant tho haha

by **gutawafang** » Jan 18th, '10, 04:51

Fucking awesome. Last punchline was the best man. You're fucking dope. :worship:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 18th, '10, 05:39

We’re not in the "same boat", Ive got better penman"ship"

like that.

need to work on originality a little,i get this is one peice but punches are the most crucial when tryna stay original.

Get your facts right, Im ill with flows
Punches go good I could be "outta state" and still "hit home"

I spit a sickenin sound from my teeth
And leave emcees "full of new cuts" like an "album release"

Nothin compares to the shit Im wreckin
You wont need to "check ya voice mail" to "get the message"

there used alot, but alot of rappers. its always goin to happen cant help it with 89 million wanne be rappers whats the chances no one has thought of the same lines, i just heard those ones alot.

by **Spyder** » Jan 18th, '10, 05:42

yea i agree with Bar

there are alot of good punchlines on here Col you just dont read em all :smoking:

and in comparison to some one like J Roc when hes on... this didnt touch it
i dont know if Ame was on some lightwork, but thats that :sweating:

just saying most of what i saw were alright, and nothing made me say DAMN
like a bunch of punchlines have before

by **Spyder** » Jan 18th, '10, 05:55

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:
there are alot of good punchlines on here Col you just dont read em all

I read more CW pieces than anyone and I'd put money on it

yea cause yous got know life nukka :smoking:

by **Spyder** » Jan 18th, '10, 05:59

its true

by **Yah-hah** » Jan 18th, '10, 16:08

I actually dug it man, always enjoy reading punches, I actually liked the PETA one lol. Can someone explain the 9:15 one I dont get it?

by **Emadyville** » Jan 18th, '10, 17:09

Yah-hah wrote:I actually dug it man, always enjoy reading punches, I actually liked the PETA one lol. Can someone explain the 9:15 one I dont get it?

WHen a clocks at the time 9:15 the hands form a straight line, one pointing at the 9 and the other at the 3, also if it were like 12:30 shit like that :y:

by **Spyder** » Jan 18th, '10, 18:33

YH you didnt get that lol

and that clock technically isnt straight :smoking:

by **Spyder** » Jan 18th, '10, 18:34

Coleon wrote:
Spyder wrote:YH you didnt get that lol

and that clock technically isnt straight

yeah it takes intellect to see that

im glad yout noticed :smoking:

by **Strictt Ame** » Jan 18th, '10, 19:54

Yeh the only time a clock is 100% straight is 6:00..but that didnt rhyme..people still got what i meant though..and this was just a fuckin around piece..nothin serious..thanks for the feed though

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