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JFK - Bitch [verse 1]

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JFK - Bitch [verse 1]

Postby theJFKshow » Jan 17th, '10, 22:49

Yo I got a girl that'll change her mood
More than a crack whore begs for food
I'm a patient dude, who's fucking straight confused
Bitch, you don't want me to make the news
Bitch, you don't want me to make a noose
And hang you with your two shoes dangling loose
Strangled, with your main frame turning shades of blue
Eighty views on Youtube, yeah I taped it too
Just to let your family see you take abuse
Cause aint nobody gonna want you when you're raped and bruised
I stayed true to you, yeah I paid my dues
Now I'm fucking stuck here just erasing you
From my memory, forgetting everything you've ever said to me
I swear to God, you'll never be anything more than dead to me
Regretting that we were ever together and you're gonna see
You better be ready to rot in Hell for all eternity.
Last edited by theJFKshow on Jan 18th, '10, 20:51, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: JFK - Bitch [verse 1]

Postby Edge » Jan 18th, '10, 07:48

this is the first thing i ever read by u but damnnn... :worship: i love how easily the multis flow bro
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: JFK - Bitch [verse 1]

Postby theJFKshow » Jan 19th, '10, 07:14

Thanks guys, audio should be coming soon.
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Re: JFK - Bitch [verse 1]

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 19th, '10, 07:16

Fuck, I came in thinkin this was gonna be whack...cause I've never seen one of your drops...but fuck the flow on here is great...I liked this piece...bravo
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