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Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby J Roc » Jan 18th, '10, 01:13

Bitches Get Slapped Where It Isn't There Ass And I'mma Be The Pimp With The Hand
So He Called Himself an 'MC' Cuz Backwards That's How Far He's Getting in Rap (a CM)
Dude's Doing Doing Typical Trash Thinking It's Mad..Honestly Need's to Sit & Relax
Arguing Details Of Sorts , About Spitting With Class When He Failed the Course
I'm Seeing-a-Bitch, Speaking-Of-Which Wasn't Ur Gender Switched to 'Female' Before??
What^? I guess if You & Roc Is Clashing Like-'Guns' i-Won And That's 'Automatic'
The Drops-I-Wrote-Bitch make u Claustaphobic i bet u'll Start To Panic
Start Freaking-Out .. Shiiitt Even-Now His Own Heart's Attacking
These-Bar's-Sick Until U & TR-'Drift' Until his Car Is Crashing into Garbage Can's And
Apartments / Mansion's The Parts Of That Shit That's Hard Established
Then Arson That Shit no Chance Of Survival The Price u Pay not to get ur Harlem Ass Kicked
Think you owned-my-text? Don't 'Hold-Your-Breath' Even If you Started Laughing
I Peeped his Girl, Karma's Spazzzing i wouldn't Ever Get into a Car With That Bitch
Cuz Hes "Milking a Cow".. U Should Start Farming Plant's, Pick.. Then Harvest That Shit
On Your Ego Trips Eating Dicks Saying ur only 'Experimenting' Like Geniuses
So unless i 'Dip' Like Dunkaroo's Ur Wordplays 'Number-2' Cuz Their a Piece of shit

:o .... Super Light.
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 18th, '10, 01:17

J roc wrote:Bitches Get Slapped Where It Isn't There Ass And I'mma Be The Pimp With The Hand
So He Called Himself an 'MC' Cuz Backwards That's How Far He's Getting in Rap (a CM)
Dude's Doing Doing Typical Trash Thinking It's Mad..Honestly Need's to Sit & Relax
Arguing Details Of Sorts , About Spitting With Class When He Failed the Course
I'm Seeing-a-Bitch, Speaking-Of-Which Wasn't Ur Gender Switched to 'Female' Before??
What^? I guess if You & Roc Is Clashing Like-'Guns' i-Won And That's 'Automatic'
The Drops-I-Wrote-Bitch make u Claustaphobic i bet u'll Start To Panic
Start Freaking-Out .. Shiiitt Even-Now His Own Heart's Attacking
These-Bar's-Sick Until U & TR-'Drift' Until his Car Is Crashing into Garbage Can's And
Apartments / Mansion's The Parts Of That Shit That's Hard Established
Then Arson That Shit no Chance Of Survival The Price u Pay not to get ur Harlem Ass Kicked
Think you owned-my-text? Don't 'Hold-Your-Breath' Even If you Started Laughing
I Peeped his Girl, Karma's Spazzzing i wouldn't Ever Get into a Car With That Bitch
Cuz Hes "Milking a Cow".. U Should Start Farming Plant's, Pick.. Then Harvest That Shit
On Your Ego Trips Eating Dicks Saying ur only 'Experimenting' Like Geniuses
So unless i 'Dip' Like Dunkaroo's Ur Wordplays 'Number-2' Cuz Their a Piece of shit

:o .... Super Light.

What's Class's phone number? :shifty:

Nice verse. Dope wordplay, as usual. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby J Roc » Jan 18th, '10, 01:19

Haha thanks

Ohh yea that line wasn't about CLASS THE KING. Just a Schoooling lol ... So ya'll won't think im dissing him or anybody... ( :whistle: )
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 18th, '10, 01:23

J roc wrote:Haha thanks

Ohh yea that line wasn't about CLASS THE KING. Just a Schoooling lol ... So ya'll won't think im dissing him or anybody... ( :whistle: )

Nah, it was just because of this topic. :flutter:

viewtopic.php?f=29&t=76691
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby 2sDay » Jan 18th, '10, 01:24

Good wordplay, nice flow but weird rhyme scheme.....
dope verse though.... :flower:
btw it's kinda annoying to read when every word starts with a capital :sweating:
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 18th, '10, 01:28

What^? I guess if You & Roc Is Clashing Like-'Guns' i-Won And That's 'Automatic'
The Drops-I-Wrote-Bitch make u Claustaphobic i bet u'll Start To Panic


bar didnt rhyme :unsure:
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby J Roc » Jan 18th, '10, 01:41

Relapse.LP wrote:
J roc wrote:Haha thanks

Ohh yea that line wasn't about CLASS THE KING. Just a Schoooling lol ... So ya'll won't think im dissing him or anybody... ( :whistle: )

Nah, it was just because of this topic. :flutter:

viewtopic.php?f=29&t=76691


Class is coool with me lol


Bar wrote:What^? I guess if You & Roc Is Clashing Like-'Guns' i-Won And That's 'Automatic'
The Drops-I-Wrote-Bitch make u Claustaphobic i bet u'll Start To Panic


bar didnt rhyme :unsure:


lmao



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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 01:41

i see this as a tash diss :shifty:
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 18th, '10, 01:44

Spyder wrote:i see this as a tash diss :shifty:


i see this is as text on a web page.
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 01:52

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
Spyder wrote:i see this as a tash diss :shifty:


i see this is as text on a web page.


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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Magnificent » Jan 18th, '10, 01:53

Spyder wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
Spyder wrote:i see this as a tash diss :shifty:


i see this is as text on a web page.


your a living miracle

:laughing: ROFL
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 18th, '10, 02:05

Spyder wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
Spyder wrote:i see this as a tash diss :shifty:


i see this is as text on a web page.


your a living miracle


dude i actually lol'd there :laughing:
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 02:05

hahaha im glad i can make you laugh :flutter:
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 18th, '10, 02:06

Spyder wrote:hahaha im glad i can make you laugh :flutter:


ill give you 60% credit, i as already laughing from reading the text drop again
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Re: Down To Earth... Peep This

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 02:08

yea suuuuuuure :smoking:
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