Lore.

[Magnificent]

Total annihilation
the lines are blazing,
erasing with rhymes encased in
lyrical sanitation,
with flames in the painting
inflating ancient theology,
actuality came in with my reality
seeing it, high mentality
needed to be it, pieces,
deceased and, with dark diseases
coming and sparking Jesus
leaving with hearts and secrets
as heathens are lost from breathing
believe it, In coliseums
a gladiator gets beaten, and eaten
without a reason
fictitious? fuck superstitions
I'm given you living proof,
In lyrics it's mystic too
Every lyric is cryptic dude,
turning blocks like a rubix cube,

[Spyder]

i like it man, got a nice style with dope rhymes and shit
your short lines allow a nice flow, maybe try some longer lines
and see if you can keep the flow

you should be dope here

[Yah-hah]

Yeah it was dope I can flow with it really easy, rhymes were nice vocab is cool, very good job