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Rain Down

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 06:47

audio is in the stage


I thought you were the one that could make me change my ways
After all you were the one that could make me stay today.
If I knew you would just get up and leave me just like that
I never would have taken your shit, I would bust right back,
Why must I laugh, I couldn’t get a fuckin grip on what I had.
It’s to bad, to see you leave me now cause seines how
The last words you spoke were whispers that seemed so loud,
I’m down, ill admit it, bustin my ass just so I could hit it
But love blinded me like I was wearin shades that were tinted.
Envision, the one you love in another dudes embrace
Your mood will change, now every time you see her face
You’ll see his too, guess I can’t wait till the day were threw.
No more joy, no more laughter, this shit is above pain now
I just want you to comeback so I can have your love rain down.


This pain, this rain, I’m waiting for it to stop all at once
You dropped all your ones, I want you to stop all your stunts.
Quit playin them games, cause bitch sayin the names
A thousand times ain’t gonna get you your shot at aimin for fame.
Isn’t it funny that you always said money buys us company
But put your trust-in-me, your gonna have none of it honey.
And luckily, I move to quick and slick for your shit, I dodged a bullet
But if your finger was on the trigger I know you wouldn’t pull it.
Your soft, a coward, a back stabber and a thief
Now that you gone I guess it is kind of a relief.
I will always heel from wounds I have received, theres no shame now
I have stopped my sulking bitch, you best believe I’m not the same lame clown
No pain no gain, call me superman cunt I’m bout to let the hate rain down.


Its almost medicinal this position I have ended up in
Ready to make decisions by myself, you know I must win
But just then, my phone rings your tone sings, you want me back
Well to bad so sad, you fucked up all the great times we could have had.
In fact, I’ve never felt better now that I’ve gotten rid of you forever
Saying all this nonsense it was a mistake, girl you know I’m clever.
But I’m happier now you should be glad that I found
This chick that I’m with, one who wants to stick around.
In an instant we were distant felt like somethin was missin
But listen, I’m over you I don’t want you to think this track is dissin
Cause in fact it isn’t, so just sit back wishin, im free game now
So ima smile every time I see your tears rain down.
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Re: Rain Down

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 06:51

well i figured alot of people dont go to the audio stage
so post em here that way they get a little feed
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Re: Rain Down

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 18th, '10, 07:01

Lyrics are tight, but the audio kinda brings it down, no hate. :y:

It's just the flow and your voice volume. As well as the way you passively swear, haha. But you said that you hadn't learn to ride the beat yet and it's all good. :smoking:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Rain Down

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 07:03

hahah thanks

yea i know the audio bad :sweating:
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Re: Rain Down

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 18th, '10, 08:50

I like this piece Spy. Structures great and the multis are there...the one thing I would like from you is like a crazy rhyme scheme :) good work
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Re: Rain Down

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 19:00

well ill try to see what i can work out for ya Faq
what u mean really
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