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a loser's wish

Postby dsmith » Jan 18th, '10, 20:05

ive been typing for hours minutes maybe evn seconds,
thinkn bout success nd my road in which to grab it,
dreams shattered time nd time again,
maybe shit it'll change mayb this time ill win,
win wats is winning n the hands of a winner,
jus another medal trophe r another awards dinner,
bt a win in the hands of a loser is better thn success,
show yur passion to win yes a true upset,
underdog is wat ive became,
like MLK i had a dream tht one day yud feel my pain,
nt to hurt yu jus to let yu feel my position,
always losing on a lost path foreva wishing,
the sweetest taste evr to touch ny lips,
was of course my pleasure to kiss yo hips,
shes a beautiful yung lady way outa my league,
bt the loserwit the will to win will for once succedd,
this is my dream naw this is my wish,
to be wit this girl nd to share this kiss,
a loser's wish
The Best There is,The Best There Was,The Best There Will Ever Be
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Re: a loser's wish

Postby Tomega » Jan 18th, '10, 20:12

real shit man. :y:
good rhyming!

i understand people can relate to it, but me, naah, imma playa.
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Re: a loser's wish

Postby dsmith » Jan 18th, '10, 20:14

right on
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