Intentionally Sick

[Just Silver]

We start by sliding by cameras
pride from being proud, vicarious
mind diameter size of nine Canadas
prize in my handle of Jack D
capsize any whack guys tryin to attack me
lie in the backseat, right through your teeth
while the nine lay at feet, wait to release
beep straight at a Jeep, flipped out then raided him beast
jumped out of my leash, down loaded complete
frown over the street ,and them dreams you had,
shells over green, swear i made a Cesar salad
beats fantastic, so is the realness
flow hits the building the aftermath is just brilliant
after that hits the ceiling, theres no where to go
unless i teach the martians by showing the ropes,
confess to every target that i was just smoked
and had no intentions for them getting poked
so we learn from lessons and styles, correction the mild
that weren't while, i turned tribal bathed in blood
bible save your son? ha wait for his day to come
until five guys come out and spray at once
over some pills?, well your "sons" out like the day is done
shave his front till his stomach implodes
save this cunt i thought god was his soul
dont make a difference when im lobbing his bones
into a safe box for me to take home
need to just take shots at the will of my own
thats what made me media me the uh,achieving the,
reader of,a trip,leaving us

[Just Silver]

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[Fa-Q]

I like the flow...with the exception of first two lines, couldn't really get them for some reason...but everything else is good. I like the flow on this, and it doesn't necessarily look great on paper but looks like a mean audio if you ever got around to gettin it...good shit Silv

[Emadyville]

I like the flow...with the exception of first two lines, couldn't really get them for some reason...but everything else is good. I like the flow on this, and it doesn't necessarily look great on paper but looks like a mean audio if you ever got around to gettin it...good shit Silv

I agree with that, first few lines kinda stopped it, but it flowed pretty well for me, I liked the rhymes in the beginning tho, overall it was solid

[Most-Hated]

preety sold verse...I think it flowed well

you need to have a more solid foundation to the topic and structure it better though

nice