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smilies rrhyme???

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smilies rrhyme???

Postby Enimee » Jan 20th, '10, 22:39

thumbs up thumbs down, a confusin ass look
shades and some flow, ers for this fast crook
wavin bye as i smile and stick my tounge out
teeth showin lookin down what the fuck am i so surprised about
wavin my tonge around now sprayin my spit
whistin creatin a pool with all of my sweat
smokin up zippin my lips all while worshipin and given a wink
little eye big eye what that fuck now im tearin up a bit
pissed now sad lookin real cool as i drink beer and coffe
laugh my ass off shake my head and now im in love with some salty
hands on my face lookin up to god like why the fuck did i right thise weak multis?


idk my weak attempt..who can do a better smilie rhime...?
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