rapper flow...

[Enimee]

in this game ive paid a grip like pap.been up all night call like class
just to rite these raps money orientated like AP,
i make it rain like rhianna, i bring t's-pain and im nelly hotter
hah willie(really) this kids not stoppin, cause ima throw it in the bag like i was lost in
a dream with fabolous things, bobbin my head to a nas-like theifs themes
and like pac it seems the worlds against me as i sit in weezys house, no cielings
tonight Cee dub run this town like jay, like styles P we GET PAID
comin wit hot coles spydie strength, rocin JAY's AND REAL PERCISE STRICTT AME!


for anny enimee who come our way? :P

[Fa-Q]

This wasn't your best but it was alright...its a lot easier to read if you capitalize words...so just keep that in mind...structure needs a bit of work and I saw that you like punchlines...your punchlines I guarentee have been used...think of ones that people have to think about and that probably haven't been used...and don't say "like" in every punchlines...keep writing bro

[Enimee]

thanks for givin me the faqs bro yeah im workin on it :P preciate the feed really doo

[Spyder]

liking all these shotuouts

it was ight for a quick little drop, some of it rhymed a little odd imo but whatever