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quick drop

Postby Enimee » Jan 23rd, '10, 14:28

starin at this notebook lookin for a rhyme
between the lines of this loose leaf buried in my mind
reality is too scary and i find
solace inside spillin my guts to this spiral and this spine
the intracacies of rap is what im tryin to define
spin it all backwords minus all lies
multiply that with the amount of times
that drained my heart, and lay drownin in the fine
grit sand left behind
shit im--- losin my damn life his war wagin
battlin inside, a bonafide representation
of enimees constant and present frustration
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Re: quick drop

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 23rd, '10, 14:32

not bad....I'd like to see more multis from you though
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Re: quick drop

Postby Enimee » Jan 23rd, '10, 14:37

ok ill keep that in mind for my next one preciate the feedback:)
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