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Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby Solace » Jan 23rd, '10, 18:21

blah...writers block got me in a tighter spot :S

Just ripping, restitching the best, murdering, hurting, I'm evil,
Lyrics is blessed, as sick as it gets serving these people,
Ain't listening to it? Ya missing the wit, but it doesn't mean shit,
'Cause you sitting in piss, no cares because ignorance is bliss,
In a fight state where the mic lay and where the tight stay,
Might call me J Roc, 'cause right now I'm going lightweight,
With all y'all foolish sixes, devil naw, y'all just abused kittens,
Writing, music I am enfused with it so just get used to it,
Fluent with the true and sickest language to speak in,
Keep it slow for the reason yo that I'm letting the pain seep in,
Your arguments invalid with rapping, you're making me pallid,
Rapists in action bore me now, I'm now waiting for challenge,
So addicted to posters, pictures of bitches in guy bands,
Ya fangs drop to bang cock like that itty bitty city in Thailand.
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Re: Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '10, 18:29

i enjoyed but you can tell right away you have more potential than this :flower:
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Re: Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby Solace » Jan 24th, '10, 00:23

Thanks
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Re: Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby embm » Jan 24th, '10, 01:29

nice :y:
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Re: Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 24th, '10, 01:57

I wouldn't trash this 'Lace
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Re: Throwaway Garbage Verse

Postby Solace » Jan 24th, '10, 02:38

Ill take that as a compliment, thanks :)
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