tried a new rhyme shceme

[Edge]

its a little long but id appreciate feed

Im not looking to make friends in this game
Im just trying to get by til the end of my lane
End all the pain and struggles in the average day
And I got to keep going in this savage way
You have-to-pay your dues in order to get respected
And I did my time already, don’t get misdirected
If you don’t respect it, I numb your mouth like novacane
Im a know it all like I was born with Jehovah’s brain
don’t show-ya-chain, or else its going to get jacked
And that’s not just an opinion, it’s a motherfucken fact
I got the knack if you start to beef il kill-and-rob
Leave you family crying, upset, just filled-with-sobs
Blood spilled-on-sod for trying to test-my-name
Go against my word and your family crest-is-slain
I put to rest-ya-name, leave you buried in the cemetery
If you see me don’t approach me like you never-met-me
You will never get me, or fully understand my speech
I shoot the one any day, and you cant stand my reach
Lessons, man, I teach you all about this thing called rap
And if you don’t catch on, get cracked with my baseball bat
I erase all rats who got small gats, I got my shotgun
Plan all you’d like, if I find out, your plots done
I got guns, knives, blades grenades-and-katanas
Ya girls with me cause I’m paide-and-she-wanna
I’m sick like AIDS and the gonna--rea (ghonerea)
I leave you seeing doubles like Tamara and Tia (from "Sister Sister" the show about twins)
I drop you in the desert, see ya, you punk ass bitch
For telling the cops that in my trunks hash, snitch
I’m drunk-past-wits, you barely getting tipsy
I’m all about my 'hustle', you could call me Nipsey
She got a fat ass and the lips-be, perfect size and proportion
shes got a cute face, nice tits and her thighs are a fortune
Eyes are scorching, yea this girl is just amazing
Her name is Mary Jane and she loves to get to blazing
In the back seat misbehaving, shes getting real naughty
Shes my morning wake-up, I don’t need a cup of coffee
Killin me softly, probably for the rest of my life
Shes a bullet to the heart, my chest she just sliced

[Yah-hah]

Jehovahs name, novacaine Dope shit bro I liked it

[Edge]

Jehovahs name, novacaine Dope shit bro I liked it

thanks man... i was sitting in the dentist getting a root canal when i wrote this lmao

[Yah-hah]

LMAo I've done stuff like that hahah

[macdaddy019967]

wow nice
you should continue writing like this its dope

Ya girls with me cause I’m paide-and-she-wanna
I’m sick like AIDS and the gonna--rea (ghonerea)

lmao
and last 16 were siiick

[Edge]

wow nice
you should continue writing like this its dope

Ya girls with me cause I’m paide-and-she-wanna
I’m sick like AIDS and the gonna--rea (ghonerea)

lmao
and last 16 were siiick

thanks my man, i appreciate it