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Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 04:33

(Jambi)
Words just spear when I speak as I’m rippin the tracks n’
Don’t come near this disease, don’t test the mixin assassin
Cloaks, guns mirrors and sheets, simply spittin the magic
And your hearing the beast, youve gone missin shits tragic.
Ive spent years with the beats so I make a livin from rappin
Keep an ear to the streets, so I know when-this shit happens.
These lyrics my seas, Columbus and dissins my map when
I clear these emcees, everybody’s just trippin and passive.
Got you in fear when we meet, simply gettin your ass kicked
As you tear with defeat, beaten by NC’s indigenous addict.

(Sentus)
My position in music, is to steal then diss n' abuse it
Yours couldn't get bumped if Ray Charles was listenin to it
I've been sent to diffuse it, gain control, provoke the harm
Rapping? You couldn't get signed if you broke your arm
What's goin on, I got the flyest and hottest rhymes damnit
They got rapt in the ozone, now there burnin up the planet
If you can't stand it, get out, cause you are weak n pale
I'm so in touch with the lyrics that I can speak in Braille
I'll never meet with fail I ain't funny on the tracks ive wrote
Im talkin about slicin ya skin when I say imma crack a joke
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 25th, '10, 04:45

Jambi..flow was aiight, imagery was on point..metas and wordplay were missing but it was a straight verse

Sentus..flow was good as well..however your metas and wordplay were killer, the couldnt get signed line was nicely delivered..

Good little collab yall, both had strong points..meshed together pretty well..props
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 04:53

Class you like braille folk dont you :laughing:

Jambi - i like how you rhymed the whole line that shits hard to do
that being said the vocab coulda been more in depth, used alot of the same words
over and what not

Class - shit was pretty dope, i liked the braille lines even though their not crazy original
you used em ina diff way so it made em original. wordplay is getting there bro :y:
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 04:54

Coleon wrote:"you couldn't get signed with a white cast on your leg" - Chino XL

:shakehead:

:(
I know that's not from the song you sent me

And thanks spyder
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 04:57

Coleon will you hook me up with that cd of punches and such :(

and Class :o
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 04:58

What :o
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 04:59

Chino line :o
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 04:59

Spyder wrote:Chino line :o

I've never heard that line before :'(
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 05:02

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
Spyder wrote:Chino line :o

I've never heard that line before :'(


yeah yeah :coffee:


Don't act like you've never used a line before :coffee:
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 05:04

dont act like cole didnt see my comment about
wanting that punches cd :coffee:
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Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 05:07

ok you do relize i was blind at that moment.... just checkin :shifty:
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 05:10

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Don't act like you've never used a line before :coffee:


I hate it more than anything, will NEVER do it

pretty sure I inadvertently bit Bekay once before though


I know anon called you out on biting before, imma go search it :coffee:
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 05:12

Wow Jambi murdered that, multis whole line shit was mad dope. Really impressed with that for real was so sick. Wanna see more of you for sure.

Class your shit was dope as always, never heard the sign/cast line I thought it was dope but I believe you :y:
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 05:19

you's a fairnut, so ask ANABIS he ain't understanding this
cause 99% of his rhymes don't make sense, friends don't exist

What up Cole!


And thanks yah, at least someone believes me :'( ;)
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Re: Sentus & Jambi- Word Wizards

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '10, 23:40

Come on people
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