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Cardboard Diaries Pt 2.

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Cardboard Diaries Pt 2.

Postby Enimee » Jan 25th, '10, 12:38

This is wrote through the inspiration of Evanescence Call me when your Sober

just a quick verse wanna add more eventually


here i am again sun settin
dialin your number but im bettin
you wont pick up the phone cause your never at home
and the last time we talked you said to leave you alone, so
its prolly good that i got this bottle
cause it helps me to forget you more wit each swallow
the way your lips left me wantin another kiss to follow
and your eyes helped me to feel less alone and hollow
your skin like velvet so soft to the touch
and your voice, real delicate even when you talked too much
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Re: Cardboard Diaries Pt 2.

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 25th, '10, 19:50

I can say I know how that feels so the verse is one of those ones you can relate to. I dig it man keep these things up
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Cardboard Diaries Pt 2.

Postby Enimee » Jan 25th, '10, 23:09

preciate it man and i will
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