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420 CHRONICles pt.1

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420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Jan 29th, '10, 00:05

Shit that i write down when im high lol im thinking of doing it again when i get better bud :smoking:
different than usual now that i look back




Half baked with a Fat Eighth
watch green burn like No taxday
watch me as i learn from the ashtray
with ideas that pop in and out
like Kramer with all his screams and shouts
fiendish out with bongs full of greenish sprouts
the obscenest route of a redeeming spouse
who needs weed to spout of the leaning house
that his dreams about and all nice colors
fall right under the covers
burnt as shit heard the script
of plays in his head
hes wasted or dead
flaky as bread
the only thing that pisses him off
is making his bed
baking instead his memories lost
his time to the world is centuries off
clenching a sock trying to get out and dressed
about the cess? few hits and hes out of breath
goes towards his Highlander with a brand new dutch
man enough to smoke with windows up
tinted what? not givin a fuck
come police let me piss in a cup
because im too pissed to urinate
im too ripped to care what i heard today
third of an eighth left least i got a Key
im so high weeds forgotten me four for pots and seeds
that im willing to grow
the cops come around electric billing will show
that i got purple three in a row
in a basement painted rainbow
plus as far as the strains go
i get the whitest of kush
and the brightest in looks
i do it right from the books
its the craziest fuck going to work
blowing the purp and more green than some football turf
i told them i make the good calls first
maybe i might just do it again
nights of going to friends getting drunk i put the "sic" in foren
if its a body oh that was a Benz
my bad im high i should be condemned
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Re: 420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 29th, '10, 06:32

Hahahaha shorter lines help the flow, I dig it man some funny shit. I can see you extra blazed writing lmao
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: 420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 29th, '10, 07:17

:laughing: thats really funny! i like how the lines are short like Yah-hah said, helps the reader. Good job
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Re: 420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Jan 29th, '10, 22:08

Yah-hah wrote:Hahahaha shorter lines help the flow, I dig it man some funny shit. I can see you extra blazed writing lmao

thanks for the feed Yah :y:
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Re: 420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Jan 31st, '10, 21:15

bump plz
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Re: 420 CHRONICles pt.1

Postby Tash8 » Jan 31st, '10, 21:48

oh god weeeed :wub: :wub:
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