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6 wack lines

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '10, 19:22

i was bored..

I'm severing several self-centered suckers who'll never win,
No, we were never friends, I got the proof, all the evidence,
Got him chained, he's wrapped, , now where all the razors at?
Take this blade and stab a major track keeping his brain intact,
He later changes acts and becomes the one that you hate,
The one you want to suffocate, flip the finger, fuck this fake,
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Re: 6 wack lines

Postby Low Key » Jan 30th, '10, 19:23

why say they're wack if they're clearly not? :p i liked it.
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Re: 6 wack lines

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '10, 19:27

Lol thanks dude...Iunno i just feel theyre not good but if you liked it im glad :happy:
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Re: 6 wack lines

Postby Solace » Jan 31st, '10, 16:58

Dont you worry..tmmrw ill start writing something good... :y:
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Re: 6 wack lines

Postby gutawafang » Feb 1st, '10, 04:53

pretty direct and good man. :y:
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