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D.O.N. - Respect [Raw '10]

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Re: D.O.N. - Respect [Raw '10]

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 31st, '10, 19:51

was wonderin where you went. Ill drop bro, alot of good solid shit in there. :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: D.O.N. - Respect [Raw '10]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 3rd, '10, 20:28

I liked this, flowed well and most of the lines were pretty dope, rhyme wise it was above average. The only thing is how you write it makes it more difficult to read, not sure why, I guess I'm just not used to all the // and ...'s

Good drop :y:
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Re: D.O.N. - Respect [Raw '10]

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 4th, '10, 23:27

Dope drop..content was nice, not sure why the 2nd verse was only 8 bars but still some sick shit..hook was a bit shaky but I enjoyed this none the less..keep droppin
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