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lazyhazycrazydavey diss, yeah boy!

Postby Low Key » Jan 31st, '10, 15:20

you come on here like "i'm the best, and i'm way hard"
i've come on here to put you to bed, where's the graveyard?
do you want a night story? ok, hold up the light for me ..
while i recite gory - rhymes ,'fore i put you down, five storeys
your raps are quite boring, there's no way you can hack it
the exit's over there, come on let me grab your jacket
you're annoying everybody here with your battle racket
you pick on every little thing and make a rattle at it
your most basic rhymes are actually in your name
lazy hazy crazy davey is in fact a little lame
and now i must go all in, i've hacked into your game (:
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Re: lazyhazycrazydavey diss, yeah boy!

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 31st, '10, 19:38

Owned :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: lazyhazycrazydavey diss, yeah boy!

Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '10, 23:20

Lol nice shit...Obviously you went light here but still it was good
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