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Coleon - Leftovers

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Re: Coleon - Leftovers

Postby Spyder » Feb 2nd, '10, 22:54

its like ive seen em before :o


dope shit tho as u know i think, great wordplay punches in there
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Re: Coleon - Leftovers

Postby mcZu » Feb 3rd, '10, 00:28

Second verse is dope, I say keep it. Just change the last line.
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