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Coleon - Unlike You - 1st Verse

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Re: Coleon - Unlike You - 1st Verse

Postby classthe_king » Feb 15th, '10, 18:51

Overall a solid verse. I flowed to it perfectly although it was hard for me to rap it that fast while reading off a paper. I'm assuming your goona record this?

And should i just post my verse to COTM?
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Re: Coleon - Unlike You - 1st Verse

Postby Solace » Feb 15th, '10, 18:54

Bro you know I'm into these type of pieces. I fucking loved this. :y:
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Re: Coleon - Unlike You - 1st Verse

Postby classthe_king » Feb 15th, '10, 18:55

Yeah, i have some horrorcore rap beat from noodles thats sick as fuck. He's a dope producer
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