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shit i just found

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '10, 03:26

gues i wrote it a while ago cause i dont remember writing it.

I'm out of thoughts, out of breath, I've hit low ground,
I'll count this loss, the power's off and I hear no sound,
I'm shaken, forsaken, wasted and set back to the basics,
Of creation, I love it though I know that you will hate it,
I am tortured, the torch burns, I start ripping these griefs,
Just someone to put down is really all misery needs,
As I sit in these streets, I am numb, with my hollow head,
Swallowed in the darkness, see myself and I follow, dead,
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Re: shit i just found

Postby Element. » Feb 16th, '10, 10:14

Nice,

But you have got alot ALOT better i'll give ya that :flower:
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Re: shit i just found

Postby Solace » Feb 18th, '10, 23:35

Thanks hawmie.
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Postby Element. » Feb 19th, '10, 00:31

No problem :y:
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