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a little story

Postby Medicine Ball » Feb 17th, '10, 04:04

sometimes i sit and wonder about the day i got your number
my girlfriend got mad and stormed off like rain and thunder
you came from somewhere and took my breath away
and within seconds of meeting, i said something i'd never say
i was sitting with my girl on the sofa when you came over
and looked at me, i looked at you and then it was game over
i mouthed "i love you" out of nowhere, my girlfriend was next to me
and you just looked at me, couldn't believe it, but best believe
that i meant it, cause from then on i saw you as my destiny
i'd make excuses to leave my girl for a couple minutes
then i'd walk into the drinks room, knowing you were in it
i walked up to the vending machine, my girlfriend wanted coke
but because you were looking at me, i acted like such a joke
ended up pressing the wrong button, and got the wrong drink
you started laughing at me, and i was on the brink
of falling in love with you, didn't know what the fuck to do
we kept bumping into each other in the hallways, funny too
because every time we did i'd smile, i'd trip and stub my shoe
and feel like a dickhead but you'd be like aw "that was cute"
the love was true, i broke it off with my girl and i got with you
we took it slow for a month or two, best believe that we were perfect
we never argued about a thing, best believe that we're worth it
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Re: a little story

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 17th, '10, 09:13

That was pretty cool in a corny, teenage love kind of way.
The rhymes were good.
I've heard of stubbing your toe, but never about stubbing your shoe.
Man, I feel like I'm back in high school now.
I liked it.
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