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Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:55

I actually had a dream kinda about this, on some metaphor stuff.

We share the land, all teeth and fins in the deepest ocean,
So many different types we fight but we keep it goin,
From tiger to the bull sharks these fools bark then we take flight,
We take lives from fake tribes yellin Shark Pride we Great whites,
Dolphins who take mics get ate right we slam em dead,
We make fights then take lives then go chill with the hammerheads,
But lately is seems our oceans being overrun by all of these people,
Stuck in our own ocean like a trout in the clutch of an eagle,
But this isn't our ocean, its Mother Earth's property,
So we kill all the fishes praying it's mother Earth's offering,
We cover her polished things, what we see most sacred,
Shiny coins and tokens we can't help but take those payments,
Of those racist faces I just can't seem to understand,
How my proud culture is left to eatin out of an open hand,

All this land belongs to the Ocean Natives,
Shiny things and tiny beads are just hopless payments,
Leave em open, faceless, bury em in the dark sand,
Better take a hard swim, see shark fins this is Shark Land

As they board off their ships all high, mighty and proud,
They arrived to "share" but we are stuck fighting it now,
The came with their clothes and big promises of treasure,
They "own" things we don't need to even see any measure,
From the eagles with feathers to the seagulls we lecture,
The Earth is our mother they trash it so we must protect her,
They fear us at first, we live in the harshest of lands,
They use us to harvest the land and market our friends,
We tarnish the "clans" and all those who oppose us,
How can you feel above sharks when you dont even know us,
They show us no mercy, slaughter us all then call it a victory,
We return the favor and they call it a massacre for history,
How can we win this they have weapons we've don't believe,
Trading us for things we dont own because we are so niave,
Destroy MY land because they all supposedly own it,
They sail above us so we can see under their boats components,

All this land belongs to the Ocean Natives,
Shiny things and tiny beads are just hopless payments,
Leave em open, faceless, bury em in the dark sand,
Better take a hard swim, see shark fins this is Shark Land

We struggle to find a way to stop this but we just cant come together,
Too many types to unite to fight so that nothing runs together,
I'm not a whale shark, bitch im aggressive and hostile,
Quick to stick my teeth into your chest get chopped slow,
I'm no lemon or a whale shark your comparin me though,
Because I live on the ocean you aparently own,
So now I'm tearin ya throat with my massive body,
But it seems like It's just Greats fighting cause all other are passive probably,
I'm on my own fighting a battle that I'll never win,
Trust another human nope never again,
I'll sever their skin hope every one of them bleeds,
Cuttin off their arms with the shaprest of teeth,
They take more and more of my ocean, then they send me away,
To a place a cage where I'm safer to stay so they give me a day,
To grab all I can before they send us all on the current of teeth,
They're supposed to make my land better but it looks worsened to me
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 23rd, '10, 15:53

Wow I actually have to bump it without no views after two days???
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 23rd, '10, 16:42

I love how you use the sharks as a personification of indians...this is a dope piece Jus
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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 23rd, '10, 16:44

Thanks G
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 23rd, '10, 18:37

Yah-hah wrote:Thanks G

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Re: Shark Land

Postby gutawafang » Feb 24th, '10, 00:53

Nice. Talking about my cousin is cool. :flutter:

Man, I really liked it. It's very original man. :y:
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Re: Shark Land

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Feb 24th, '10, 09:25

Dope Shit, Man. Digged This Like A Miner. Flow Was Hype, Lyrics Was Hype, Multies Was Hype. Whole Fuckin' Piece Was Hype. Keep Up, Fam.
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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 24th, '10, 14:30

Hahaha I got ya guta, thank Doc :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 25th, '10, 04:50

waitin for Zu :whistle:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 26th, '10, 16:33

Bumpin damn :whistle:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Shark Land

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 2nd, '10, 16:11

Last bump :'(
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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