Raping the She-Devil

[Just Silver]

Satisfactory i take
from statutory rape
oh that would be so great
the best i had was practically an 8
immaculate in shape, when i smacked here in the face
she screamed out and bit me,
but im no sissy, i keep bangin miss missy
until repercussions from concussions
from the dry wall smashed
her sighs from gashed thighs, while im high i laugh
well besides that, her behinds all black, and blue
even my sack is bruised, damn i stay tappin Jule
i forgot to mention her name
well since i brought you here, ill explain
see it was 4pm and the lights had changed
to blurry dim sprite next to her house in Maine
i noticed that her house was nice
supposing this hoe could get my pipe tonight
i knew her from gym she would work wonders
i heard that she was first in the 50 dash runners
good shape and simplistic tastes
but how would my wood taste
soon its her debate
i crept out of gym in an eighth of a pace
the slowest I've crept up to any bitch i had raped
i took a big trash bag over her face
it was covered in mace, snapped her ribs till they break,
no shes in a hazy state, in this crazy state
grin on my face, im about to sin the night away
bring the Chardonnay, to a disregarded place ,
fissures in the paint, bordered windows in the way,
kick open the heavy decrepit door as they left it
as in they i mean rape groups, that i had been the best with
my great roots, led me to the gray roofed
little haven ,have you, best of satins rank tombs
and as i pulled out of womb a baby was born
and it straight dropped out with Lucifer's Sword
came to congratulate me and give me a medal
had no idea i was giving it to the devil.... damn

[Just Silver]

bumpin

[Fa-Q]

Damn man I really like this song...its great story telling and imagery. Damn Silv you comming up, two things you need to do: work on your structure, and it looks a lot better if you capatalize every first letter of each line and capatalize I's...it just looks better, more proffesional...good shit though *high fives*

[Just Silver]

Damn man I really like this song...its great story telling and imagery. Damn Silv you comming up, two things you need to do: work on your structure, and it looks a lot better if you capatalize every first letter of each line and capatalize I's...it just looks better, more proffesional...good shit though *high fives*

thanks man
usually i come up with good ideas when im half asleep such as this one lol

and about structure its just hard can never get a hang of it

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Good, good, good.

Just be careful how many times you use the word "rape". You don't want to overdo it.

[Just Silver]

Good, good, good.

Just be careful how many times you use the word "rape". You don't want to overdo it.

lol yeah good point

got the message across though