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Torture Chamber

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Torture Chamber

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Mar 3rd, '10, 23:16

If you care for the beat I did it to it's called Torture Chamber by VTZ

Grouped the 16's into 8's so it might be easier on the eyes and not a block of text as much. If there's parts you don't understand I'll reference it.


Praised as a savior before Zoroastrian Ages
Creating Ahura Mazda and then again recreating
Magnum opus when Neolithic Egyptian
hieroglyphs clash with Sumerian to Cyrillic scripts...
Cursed word slurs turn your minds turbid
Restless, not reassured so I'll burgeon.
bludgeon thoughts till corruption erupts in
Mount Etna sending brain matter into dust bins.

Ice Age takes over, No four leaf clovers
Light excavates running life like castrol motors
Polymath here now the rebirth's closer
Introverting spirits to listen a little bit closer
Renaissance but onlookers lookin farrago
Desperado losing marbles hit with hollows
The mic, swallow or your head a furbelow
Hanging to drain, Caribou impaled with arrows.

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All bio-organisms know the math and be flattered
Acquiesce the rapture or get phantasmally mastered
Fatal Frames captured, Souls daggered on walls plastered
Jeff Dahmer when food's on platters, food bein rappers
Platters being shattered, their bars fractured
Skulduggery acts staggered from here after
Put on the podium, alibi's questioning
Polygraphist says his blood pressure's flexing

Tightening up so much oranges he could freshly squeeze
Farmer stabbin em through the heart, sickle cell disease
Hope he's impersonating divinity, Sydney Carton.
Gallows meeting purification then body's cart slung
Embellishing this destroyed hall of fame
Connoisseur with hollow cynosures displayed
Housing saints, Slovakian mausoleums say
Post-classical age, alive but I still had some made.

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Immortal, invincible quaking like a chariot race
My Achilles heel is protected with a carapace
The most threatening claims Ras Kass asseverates
Diving into topics long thought laid in their graves
Psychs talking to listeners whose mind frames have been violated
Questioning "what happened that day" as their confabulation
Is my propaganda...on replay...
The Neo Big Brother inducing with radio waves

But when the explicit decibels wreck your molecular whole
It's ineluctable like celibacy 'less you let ya rectum go
Don't condone homosexuals, Cyrus conquers Lesbos
More like Caesar, give me infinite bitches and let's role...play,
but don't say you're the best emcee you'll have me equivocating
You can be whatever but don't think insane,
I'll conflate a sideways triangular shape to your membrane
being the closest you'll ever come to getting plays.
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